I was so excited when I began to read this book because it showed both a young Arthur Weasley and Molly Prewett, two very underrated characters.
I really enjoyed reading the way that you portrayed young Arthur. You really managed to capture his character, especially his obsession with Muggles and Muggle objects! A suggestion I have is to go back to the first few chapters and add some spacing between the paragraphs so that the reader doesn't get confused.
The face claims for both Arthur (Arthur Darvill) and Molly (Jane Levy) are very suiting for the characters.
The first chapter was jumpy; the location kept changing and it got somewhat confusing. Maybe go back and add some details (such as Arthur's experience of choosing a wand) so that the writing can flow better.
When switching off with the point of view, I recommend putting in a page divider so that the reader is aware that the narrator is changing. It can be as simple as adding in a line of periods, such as-
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Now, the reader can expect to be in a different setting with different characters.
Other than that, your writing style is creative, and both Arthur and Molly are staying true to character. There were few grammatical errors, and the interaction of all the characters is very in-character. I'm very excited to see where you take the book from here!
So far, I rate Arthur Weasley 8/10 for his character because he is the same as the adult Arthur that we all know and love!
I hope that this review was helpful. Happy writing!
