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REVIEW:
I absolutely love your book!
You have portrayed Andromeda perfectly in my opinion. You have shown her as a caring, yet reasonable sister. Even though she loves Bellatrix, she does not fully agree with her beliefs. She doesn't throw around the word Mudblood like the rest of her family, and is overall a sweet person who loves her sisters a lot.
I really loved the part where Andy stitched a doll for Narcissa, and even Bellatrix joined to help her. You have written Narcissa as a cheerful, bubbly, innocent girl. Bellatrix is also very close with her sisters, but her views and obsession with making the family proud slowly makes her drift away from them. Although we do not know much about their personalities as children, I think it's safe to say that this is how each of the sisters would have been like.
Your writing is beautiful, with short descriptions and captivating dialogue that capture the sisters' relationships perfectly. I love how you are focusing on the days even before they started Hogwarts, and how you are portraying the dark side of the Black (and other pureblood) families. The parents care more about their reputation than their children, and wouldn't hesitate to cane a five year old child for a simple mistake. I also love how you include several side characters to bring more depth to your story.
Your book overall, portrays the Black family marvelously. I think you have captured the three sisters really well, and for character portrayal, I would give you a 10/10.
