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。prophecy

TITLE: Prophecy
AUTHOR: amity_bird
PROTAGONIST: Sybill Trelawney
CHAPTERS: five (ongoing)
SUMMARY: in which the girl who only wants fame falls for the boy who simply wants her caresses.
TAGS: harrypotter, hogwarts, love, magic, muggle, pureblood, sybilltrelawney.

REVIEW:
Undeniably, this story deserves so much more recognition as well as all of the love and care in the world.

The author captivates us immediately with their stunning writing style, that is not too light nor too heavy, with the right amount of figures of speech at the right moments which only adds charm (and a cuteness overload!) to the story.

Sybill's character is equally presented with both flaws and qualities (which has become quite rare on Wattpad), creating a rather unique character that is so much more human and real, as a little girl with a plan, who won't let anyone tear her dreams down. We can sense that the determination is a relevant factor to the story.

Sybill's face claim is Odeya Rush-an unusual one on Wattpad which satisfies us and varies from the usual face claims used in fictions. The other protagonist and OC is Arthur Higglebottom, portrayed by Thomas Sangster, who I cannot yet describe at this point in the story, for he has only made one appearance so far. The last important character is named Jessa and is Arthur's twin sister-she's very touching and adorable in a way, and you want to get closer to her for those reasons (and she breaks gender stereotypes which is wonderful!).

If I had anything negative to say about the story, it would probably be the lack of diversity-everyone's white and straight-but the story has just begun and it's too early to judge, thus I cannot quite comment about it yet.

I give this story an 8.5/10 and another 8.5/10 for Sybill's character.

(reviewed by kencbi)