summary: fear is what makes the world go round. but what if you wanted it to stop?
review: First of all, this book is amazing so far! It is written beautifully, and the plot is very unique. I'm eagerly anticipating the next update!
Pansy is written very much in character, yet there is a more human side to her that we never get to see in the original Harry Potter books. She has a strong sense of pride and starts off the book by saying that "Muggle" is another word for "inferior", which is exactly how she is portrayed in the books. Yet, she still regrets her actions and seems to want to get punished for them, which seems to be a very big point throughout the book. Pansy is very well-developed, and even though this book is fanfiction, you are making her your own character by adding depth.
I've never read a book about a wizard or witch bonding with a Christian Muggle, but it's fascinating! Iris is already a well-developed character; the reader knows that she is easy to forgive and kind, yet still ready to defend herself and her beliefs. She's not a pushover, but she's a person who is much kinder than Pansy.
I'm very excited to see Pansy portrayed as a member of the LGBTQ+ community, and I'm eager to see if she and Iris get together. So far, they have a very simple relationship that can not yet be called friendship, but it almost is.
Again, your book is written beautifully. The words flow together wonderfully, and there were little to no grammar mistakes. It's a wonderful book so far, and I can't wait to read more!
So far, I rate Pansy Parkinson 10/10 for her amazing character portrayal.
I hope that this review was helpful! Happy writing!
