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Youth's POV
She takes the route on her left , if my guesses were right, it leads to an abandoned park,
Is she crazy?
Does she know how dangerous this place could be for a woman, not just any ordinary woman, a beautiful woman like her?
The tall trees sway in rhythm as if to dance to the solos formed by the wavering night breeze ,
She finally stops close to a bench and sits down ,
I lean on a tall tree behind her,
Away from her sight,
For a moment, I think I'm hearing wrong,
I strain my ear further and I hear her sobbing ,
Every fibre in me is desperately pushing me to go and console her and shield her from the world , but I stay still,
I wish I could see what is going on in her head, I wonder what's going on,
Could it be that Mr jerk had broken up with her?
No I doubt that, he won't be such a fool to loose such a gem ,
Could she be having a financial problem? If that was the case I wish she would talk to me , I could help her out,
we aren't even close enough to discuss personal matters,
Gosh I'm frustrated
I close my eyes and take a deep breath out of frustration,
"Hey hottie, you look damn pretty to be out here without company " I hear someone say and my eyes is immediately snapped open
I look up to see a man , sitting very close to her , had she invited him? Who could he be? I don't think Susan could hang around such kind of a person, he look like a street drunk.
But from the way Susan spared him a disgustingly look, I knew she didn't know him,
"Please sir, would you kindly let me be, I'd love to be alone" Susans says bravely ,
I'm amused, she didn't seem petrified by his presence , he was obviously a disgusting criminal
I see her hold her nose in irritation, he must be stinking,
He doesn't look like he had had a bath in 2years.
"You can't be alone sugar, we could keep each other company, think of the things we could do together" the thug says as he draws closer to Susan,
I'm restless , furious, angry all the most terrible emotion is what I feel right now
I can't risk her seeing me, I don't know how she would react
I'm gonna count to ten , if he doesn't leave, I swear, his body is gonna be rejected by all hospitals by the time I'm done with him.
"1"
"2"
"3"
"4"
"5"
"6"
"Stop it ! Are you some shit fucked up psycho?" Susan shrieks and jumps out of her seat as he tried to kiss her ,
He pulls out a small pocket knife and heads for her, she keep going backward , and he keeps going after her , she hits her leg on something
Without thinking I'm striding like a beast towards them ,
Thanks to my long legs I cover more ground in few strides,
I see Susan sit on the wet grass , with her back against the tree, panic is painted all over her extremely beautiful face, I want to reach for her and kiss it away,
My anger grows stronger , she uses her hand as a shield to block her face ,
I don't think she has seen me
I reach for the thug from behind startling him, he looks stunned, I kick of the knife from his hands before he decides to use it against me, it falls to the ground and he immediately struggle to pick it up , but I kick it further ,
I give him a heavy punch across his faces , he falls to the ground holding his face painstakingly
Susan gaze has been on me, like she had seen a ghost ,
"Now is not the time to lust after me with your eyes, you should be sane enough to understand what is happening before you, get the hell out of here and call the cops " I bark at her,
She looks so startled, I want so much to sooth her
But then I have a thug to face,
As soon as I see her leave
I immediately turn to him , but I was too late , he already aimed
