The Carnival (A CREEPYPASTA FAN FICTION)

Chapter 3

(Sally's POV)

     Laughing Jack told me I can gather people so we more people can have fun with me and Laughing Jack. I want to ask everyone to come but I know I would just be bothering them, so I only ask people I know will at least not be bothered if I ask them to come. The first person I ask is Charlie because I know Charlie wanted to go any way, and he said yes. Next I go ask Jane I would ask Jeff but he is always so mean to me, and I know he doesn't like Jane, so I will only ask him if Jane says no. I run up the stairs and the first door on my left is Jane's so I go up and knock on it, right away it is swing open,

     "JEFF THAT BETTER NOT BE YOU, oh hi Sally what are you doing here?" I flinch away sometimes Jane can be scary, especially if she's mad at Jeff.

     "Well I wondering if um, you would like to go to a carnival with me, and Laughing Jack!" I look up at her with my best puppy dog eyes. I really want her to come.

     "Like, do you mean Laughing Jack's carnival?" She gave me a questioning look, she doesn't look to happy.

     "No a different one," I say smiling, hoping she would come. "It says you can wear costume so we can just be ourselves."

     "Well Sally that does sound really fun, but it's my turn to go out killing. So I'm afraid I won't be able to go." She gave me a polite smile, but I knew I was just bothering her. I could see it in her eyes.

     "That's ok Jane, maybe next time." With that she closed her door a little hard. Am I no longer cute? Well on to the next door. Which would be Clockwork, I go and knock on the door that has a giant clock on it. The door opens, and there stands Clockwork.

     "Hey kid what can I do you for?" She looked happy.

     "I was wondering if you wanted to come to a carnival with me and LJ?" I gave her the biggest smile I could muster.

     "Sorry kid, but me and Jane are going to out and kill some assholes tonight so I can't come sorry," She didn't really look sorry though. She still looked happy.

     "It's fine." I left to go to the next door, it was the proxies door. I still don't know why they have to share a room there are over hundreds of unused rooms in the mansion. I knocked on the door and no one answered, so I knocked again. Then the door swung open rather quickly, almost hitting me in the head.

     "Whose there!" It was Brian. He looked around then almost closed the door before I piped up.

     "Me and Laughing Jack were going to a carnival and I was wondering if any one in there would like to go, and before you ask no it is not Laughing Jacks's carnival and yes you can wear your masks." I tried to tell him all the information so he didn't have to ask.

      "I don't really want to, not a biggest fan of carnivals or Laughing Jack he kinda creeps me out," he mumbles the last part under my breath "but I can ask the others for you." He stuck his head in to a couple of seconds then pulled his head back out then said "Tim doesn't want to, he doesn't like carnivals either but Toby will." He said with a smile.

     Toby emerged from the doorway and I told him all about how the girls didn't want to come and he laughed and twitched as we went to go ask other creepypastas if they would like to join in our adventure. In the end we gathered Dollmaker, Liu, and BEN. I would have asked Splendor, Trendor, and Slendy but their away on some business. We all went downstairs to find Laughing Jack; he wasn't very hard to find though he's a giant clown, and we told him we were ready to go. He smiled and said,

     "This my good friends is going to be a wonderful evening!!" It was 9:30 already so I asked,

     "Can we go yet I don't want to be late." Laughing Jack grabbed my hand tightly and motioned everyone to follow him, I can't wait! Laughing Jack lead us through the giant wooden doors to the mansion, and into the forest. The sun was setting so we were just able to find our path easily, soon we came to a clearing were there was a giant tent, the colours on it were faded, and the rides beside the tent looked so worn out from use that I would be scared to go on them. The cool thing was that people actually dressed up, there were clowns, and fairies, and characters from shows I have never watched before. Before I knew it I was being lead inside the gigantic tent. There was music playing in the background but I couldn't tell what it was saying. After walking around the tent trying to find a spot we found some in the very back, we all sat down and talked until the show started.

(Thorn's POV)

     "Ha ha, I win you losers!!" I set my cards reviling a royal flush in all the same suit. All of them sighed in defeat, I knew I would win it's easy. I looked down at my newly won watch and I almost cursed myself out I had 5 minute before I had to go on stage. I got everything ready to go, this is going to be a great night.
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(This chapter is re-written)

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