He Looks Like a God, But is he One Too? (Exquisite Attraction)(On hold)

Exquisite Attraction Chapter Fourteen

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First day of school!!! I'm soooo tired. And stressed. My shoes were killing me. I hated walking and having to wake up early, thought I got to wear my cute little ensemble. Gah, I. Am. Tired. If I could ask for school to end now, I would. I know you probably don't care about my school day, but I just need to vent my feelings, so you could skip this paragraph if you wanted. Hm, I always feel like I'm forgetting something I need. What was it?????

Sorry the previouslys are so long, I didn't intend for it. Just wanted to let you remember a little bit of what happened in the last chapter.

I kind of like Kevin's POV, but I feel like it gives too much information away if I kept on writing with his POV. I like Fallon's cause it still leaves you with a mystery? What do you think? And should I ever do Aphrodite's POV again, or should I just stick with Fallon's? Any follow up characters too?

The votes were okay. But I"m hoping for more later. Right now, I just want to collapse and rest, but I thought I'd post this chapter.

Go go go comment, and enjoy the chapter!

Previously

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Kevin's POV

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"Because I don't love you," I answered.

"But that's such a tiny detail," she tried to persuade. "Unless... you like someone else." I paused for a moment, then spoke, but I knew she had caught my hesitation.

"That's ridiculous," I said.

"No it's not, who is it?"

"No one."

"It's that girl isn't it?" Annie asked furiously. "That human girl who was pretty. I know it's her. But I'm gorgeous too! And she's just a-"

"Just, please, shut up," I said as we arrived at my house. "Just don't talk about her that way," I stated. By the tone I used, it was obvious that it was the end to the conversation.

With that, I threw my car door open, and walked out, not waiting to see if she would follow.

Fallon's POV

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"Yeah you don't," Aphrodite replied. Wait. To what? To my mind? I frowned. Why couldn't they not read my mind. "He still does. Your right. I bet Revink was very happy about their reunion. I can just see it now, those two, cuddling by a fire maybe..."

I turned my head away so she couldn't see my conflicting emotions. I hated this. Why did she have to talk to me.

"Are you tired?" Aphrodite asked. "Is this little talk tiring your pity human brain. Go get some rest. We can talk tomorrow if you want." Then, she disappeared. Leaving nothing in her space, but the cold words she had sent into my heart.

Chapter Fourteen

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Fallon's POV

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"You're pretty silent. You haven't spoken this whole car ride," Ashley told me. I just nodded, still mute. "Why? Why won't you talk?"

"Cause I don't feel like it," I muttered. We were driving in Ashley's car on the way to school and I had been silent. But that was because I didn't want to speak. My brain was still puzzling over Aphrodite's words. I stared out the window as we passed by other houses and trees along the way.

"You sure it's something you don't want to talk about?" she asked. I shook my head.

"No, It's not."

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"Why does she look so down?" Lucy asked as Ashley and I arrived at school. I sighed. Was everyone going to ask me that question.

"I think she's having boy trouble," Ashley volunteered. I frowned.

"I'm not having... well. I don't have a boyfriend so I can't be having boy trouble."

"Yes you can," Ashley replied. "And I think I know who this boyfriend trouble has to do with."

"Kevin is not my boyfriend!" I argued. And then I realized my mistake but it was too late. Lucy and Ashley stared at me with wide round eyes.

"Ooh!" they yelled. "You do like Kevin!"

"Sh!" I hissed, making a dive to cover their mouths. "Could you keep it down."

"Sorry," Lucy whispered. Her tongue accidentally hit my palm and I retracted it quickly and wiped it off on my pants hurriedly. She laughed at my disgust.

"But come on, like you thought we didn't notice. It was totally obvious." Ashley nodded.

"Yeah, it was." Frowning, I shook my head.

"I don't like him...."

"Of course you do," Lucy protested. "You said his name, and we didn't say anything about him. That means you like him."

"That doesn't mean that. I could have just thought that he was who you two were talking about.... So what if I do? Is that bad?" I asked, finally coming to the conclusion that they both new I liked him. It was hard to accept, because I wasn't sure I really believed it myself. And, because, I really didn't know anything about him other than being a god. I couldn't fall in love with him without knowing some of his lifes details. But Lucy and Ashley seemed adament that I liked him.

"OMG! You do like him! That is so cool. You two would look so good together." I scowled at her.

"Why should that matter. I know nothing about him, and he, none about me. I mean, I can't love him can I? And it would be a waste if he didn't like me."

"Stop putting yourself down," Ashley told me as we made our way into the school. "He likes you. It's obvious in the way he looks at you."

"It is?" I asked surprised. How did he look at me? I never noticed.

"Yep, it is," she replied. "You should totally ask him out. I know he'll say yes."

"Okay," I replied lightly. What if he did like me. I shouldn't worry about Anneleous anyway. How did I know Aphrodite was telling the truth? She is trying to kill me, I reminded myself. "I guess I might ask him." Ashley and Lucy nodded their approval. "But Ashley, I thought you kind of liked Re- Kevin." Oops.

"Be right there," she mouthed to someone in the distance. "I did,"she admitted. "But I don't anymore." I nodded. That was good. Before she left for whoever had called her she said one last thing. "I like Ares now."

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This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo short. And I'm sorry.

I know you were expecting a longer chapter (so was I) but I've been busy. I'll try to make it up to you but I might post this Friday or Saturday due to school. Sorry :( :( It pains me not to write.

I'm hoping for more votes. I really need some more, and comments too.