He Looks Like a God, But is he One Too? (Exquisite Attraction)(On hold)

Exquisite Attraction Chapter Eighteen

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.... I know strange, how I started that off, but I had to.

Sorry for the delay, as most of you know my computer died, but......... dum de dum, it came back to life!!! I had this chapter on here, and I didn't want to re write, so here it is now. I can finally post :D

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Previously

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Leaving the store was like a relief. There was something so tensed about the place. As I wakled towards the food court, I started to hear screaming. Frowning, I tried to find the source of the screaming. Then, I screamed myself.

My feet skidded across the floor as I tried to back up, and I fell flat on my butt. Deep quick gasps entered my thoat and my sudden moment of hysteria. Standing on all fours before me, was a large, gigantic, fluffy, snarling, breathing, three headed dog.

Chapter Eighteen

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I just sat there and stared at the gigantic animal. The three heads turned towards me, completely instinct. Their sharp eyes locked onto my face. There was something so familiar about it. And then I figured out what this beast was. It was Cerberus, the three headed dog they said that lived in the Underworld. It guards the gates of Hades, to stop people who have crossed The River of Styx from turning back. But what was it doing here. What would if want from me?

Slowly keeping my eyes on the dog (dogs?), I began to back up. It had large eyes that stayed on me. Why was it here? In public at the most too. Still slowly, I kept moving back. Until my back hit one of the walls. Cerberus chose this time to come at me.

Quickly I scrambled up. I let out a quick scream as I dodged the attack. It slammed into the wall and it blasted into crumbles of concrete and wood. My eyes widened as I ran for the exit. Not seeing the chair that had somehow fallen before me, I tripped over it and plummeted to the floor.

"Ah!" Ouch, that hurt. My face had made contact with the ground, and there was now a large pain in my head. My hands were trembling as I tried to cradle my head. I could almost hear Aprhodite laughing, "That's why they call you Fall!"

Snarling came from in front of me. Weakly, I glanced up and spotted Ceberus before me. It's teeth were bared as it stared at me. Looking at me like I was a sign that said, "Fresh Live Meat - 50% off!" I closed my eyes tightly, waiting for death to come. I just wish it was quick. A long death would be... painful.

My eyes were completely shut when I hear a roar, and then something whizzing through the air. I pulled open my eyes slightly and saw something moving quickly through the air, though I was too disoriented to make anything out.

I started to black out when I heard a thud on the ground. Suddenly, I was picked up in the air by strong arms, Barely concious, I stared back at my savior, only to say, "Who... are you?"

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