Genre: Fandom (BTS)
Description: "Paris, romantic nights, soirées, but not for her and never for him."
Notes: First off, I'm not in the BTS (I think?) fandom. So this one was hard for me to grade, and if I made mistakes, I understand. Good storyline and plot, the problem is evident right away.
Statistic grade: 95%, A
My grade: I can't. It's just really hard to grade this type of stuff, especially because I don't know the characters. Is Jungkook really a CEO, or a singer, or both? I have no idea. Sorry.
Negatives:
-8 for punctuation.--biggest issue-- These were all commas. Nothing major, just scattered throughout.
-2 for capitalization. All words in a company or any proper noun must be capitalized.
-1 for unrealisticness. No one calls people Mr. CEO... I don't think. (I'm not in the fandom, so I'm not sure.) It would be Mr. Jungkook.
-3 for spelling/grammar. Again, not a big problem.
-1 for word structure.
*I would take points off for over descriptiveness, but seeing as it is a romance/fanfiction, I'll leave it be. I would suggest going easy on the big words and adjectives, though.**
Positives:
+10 for realisticness. All of the paparazzi and news/media coverage, and living with friends, and hating a guy that ruined your life, all are realistic, and happen to celebrities. (Plus your book isn't that bad. )
I do want to put in that the book was written very well. The mistakes I found weren't common. It's just a different style than I'm used to, so if it seems negative, it's not supposed to be. It is a very good book!
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