Genre: Teen FictionSummary: Rosalie Castings. Perfect student. She emanates courage and kindness. Hot as a scorching flame. Nathan Arrows. Town's bad boy. He evokes fear and admiration. Cold as ice. Polar opposites. But there's one thing they have in common. Danger. She's attracted to it and he radiates it.
Negatives:
-16 for commas
-4 for punctuation
-5 for grammar/spelling
-2 for confusion. See below.
-15 for tense change.
Confusion:
What is Calculus BC?
How do you get an open wound from a fist fight?
Notes:
When you have thoughts, they all need need to be in itallics, or they all need to be the same tense. Didn't take points off for this, but it needs to be changed.
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