And Now You're Gone by @EmmaEverAfter

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Genre: Poetry

Summary: Broken love pooems ❤



*Note: This was hard. Since it is poetry, I can't exactly grade it on punctuation (most problems usually), and the grammar is allowed to be off, because it's poetry. So there isn't really a score on here, just some negatives and positives.*

My grade: A


Negatives: 

-I noticed some of your lines rhymed, while some didn't. It's okay to do that, if you have a pattern to it, and that pattern should continue the entire poem. I know it can be really hard (I have a poem book, it is one of the things I struggle with), but try to stay consistent with the rhymes. 

-umm, that's about it. As I said before, I won't grade it with numbers, cause I kinda can't. I will put my opinion grade on there.


Positives:

-No spelling/grammar errors that weren't intentional. 

-They are emotional

-They are relatable (except for me, apparently. I don't do relationships. But everyone else found them super relatable, so...)


Yeah, a good poetry book. No mistakes that I could catch in the first few (5ish?) poems. They are all about romance, but that's some people's favorite, so I can't downgrade anything.......

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