Title: Forgotten Regrets.
Author: TDlover21
Reviewer: strawberrytriflesCover: I honestly do not like your cover. It could definitely be better. Please do change your cover.
Title: So your title is actually contradicting and that's what makes it cool. I was trying to fathom and imagine what it'll actually be like to forget my regrets. Honestly no matter how much I imagine, I can't wrap my fingers around it. A high five for it.🙋
Summary: Your summary is actually cool. Although they're certain parts that are confusing and I'll like you to work on it. For example "He wanted her, the one..." This sentence should be in a different paragraph.
Just paragraph some of your conjoined sentences. If you feel confused despite my explanation, do feel free to pm me to put you through.Plot: So it's a fan fiction and I don't know the Fanfic, sorry about that. Since I don't have any knowledge of your Fanfic, I'll judge it as a normal book. I actually love your plot and hope you continue of the good note.
Review based on the only chapter available.
The chapter was well written and the description is spot on. The only thing that put me off is the whole cliche of good girl gone bad. I don't really like when people change themselves because of someone or what the person did to them. No worries it's just a personal thing.
What I liked👍
👍The title
👍The plot despite the cliche good girl gone bad.What I didn't like🚫
🚫The confusing summary part.
🚫The cover- I didn't like it one bit. Sorry if this seems harsh.Reviewer's final words.
So when I read I always try to keep an open mind regardless of the genre. Fanfic isn't my forte but I really enjoyed yours. Just do me a favor and work on your mistakes. You're an amazing writer.Cheers🍻
Emma❤
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