Golden Arrow Reviews

Review #5: Hunter

Reviewer: taz2327
Story: Hunter by girl_from_6277

Review:
❤Cover
In my opinion the cover is unimportant even though it is what makes me want to read a story. I think a more catching cover could potentially get you more read but your story quality stays the same no matter what.

❤Description
The stories description is a little bland and doesn't catch as much attention as the prolouge but it still says what it needs to say. As I would like to say it's short and sweet.

❤Prolouge
Your prolouge catches attention well and lays the ground for the rest of the story without giving away major details of what's to come. Bravo!!

❤How Interesting
This story can fall flat at times making me rush through but overall I was very interested in reading it. I think your pace could just be adjusted. I loved your action scenes and your character development really made me interested!!

❤Notes
Your story is absolutely beautiful you did an amazing job. I absolutely can not believe English isn't your first language your writing is amazing considering that. I won't comment on spelling or grammar just because of that in your authors note.

Your descriptions of events are in-depth and gives you an understanding of what is happening throughout the story. When it comes to moments you want to put emphasis on make sure to go into detail just a tiny but more (really not a lot) and make your details very persise + unique. I love to read similes and metaphors and silly ways of describing things.

I'm sorry this review isn't very long but I don't have much to criticize!! Just remember to keep writing.

You did an amazing job.
*applause*
*cheering*
👏👏❤