Review #13: In the Name of Love.

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Title: In The Name Of Love.
Author: Sandra_Tacko
Reviewer:strawberrytrifles

Cover: The cover of the book is really nice and good. The only complain I have for your cover is the author's name isn't on the cover.

Title: Honestly the title is actually good, but it's kind of cliche. I mean you always see things like these 'for love' 'because of love' 'for him', such phrases are so common in romance stories. I'm not saying that it's bad or horrible, it's just kind of cliche.
Since it portrays your title, it's not bad at all. I just feel you should look for something more unique.

Summary: The summary is good too, but like your title it's also a bit cliche. The whole bumping into each other in the hallway. The battling of inner demons thing is actually cliche.
Overall it's okay and it's actually a good summary. Not too short and also not too long.

Plot: Your plot is really good, although some parts of it are cliche. It just has a way of stealing one's heart immediately you start reading it. Who doesn't love a good old cliche?😃

Review based on all the chapters available.

So while your book was every aspect of cool, some parts were just really weird.

* Like the part where you said Ian painted his fingers nails black. I felt it was really weird, I mean sure he's gay but it still feels weird. I really advice that if you want to write about an unfamiliar topic, you ask questions or make enquiries from people that know. If you don't know much about that topic, you steer clear until you are sure so as not to rub people in the community in the wrong way.
I hope this is not too harsh, 'cause I just want to be honest with you.
I don't know much about the LGBT community, so I steer clear from that community.

* Also the part of Isabella picking a call during s*x is just every aspect of weird and really disturbing.

Overall analysis.

What I liked👍

👍Cover.
👍Plot.

What I didn't like.🚫

🚫I already stated it in the chapters review.

Reviewer's final words.

I'm not a professional writer and 30 days ultimatum is my first book ever. I'm not judging anyone or saying anyone sucks. Where my book is today is because of various reviewers who were honest with their reviews. Life isn't all strawberries and honey.
Hope this review helps you in some way.

Thanks for requesting
Cheers🍻
Emma❤

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