Hello!
I just want to address something about this story.I am aware of the many errors that are in this; at the time of writing Life in the Past, my writing was pretty meh.
Bad descriptions to things that don't make sense...
Trying to think of a YuGiOh 5000 year old civilization in Egypt was pretty difficult.I am thankful for those who clarified on either what I meant or questioned why I put was there.
Recently, I've been getting a lot of comments about every issue like.. currency or a cooler, etc. Even when writing this, I knew those things didn't "exist" but I didn't know how to put it.
If I were to rewrite this, I know it would be much better and went well with its time period.But hey, it's fanfiction. There's never logic in that.
And it's YuGiOh. As far as I'm aware, that show doesn't have logic in it either.But, anyways, I want to say I'm sorry for the many mistakes I had made when writing this...
It bothers me that I didn't describe things afterwards or added notes to explain those things more in depth.
Or- just say something else rather than what I put.Again, I'm sorry about that...
It really bothers me and if I wasn't lazy, I'd fix those mistakes.
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Life in the Past - Yu-Gi-Oh Fanfic [Finished]
FanfictionYugi, a young boy who was a servant for the royal family in Egypt, had stumbled upon the young prince with one of his teachers in the garden. Yugi was not allowed to befriend or speak with Atem unless asked or forced to. One day, Yugi was playing wi...