Hi! I'm working on making the story more interesting and in point... So if ya got some tips, point them out in the comments! Need... Tips! So... Hope you enjoy!
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Izumi's POV-
I woke up to Itachi's face staring at me. "Oh... So that's what he looks like. The lines on his face looks like... Carrots!" I thought. Woah. My mind got messed up.
"You okay?"
I didn't respond, because I didn't know how to. "Uh... Yeah. Yep. Sure. Totally fine." Well, that was convincing.
"Okay... We're almost at Konaha, just rest for now." Ohh... Rest. Sounds nice... And then I fell asleep again. Deep sleep, nightmarish sleep.
(Yeah. Sorry. Completely unnecessary but I just wanted to horrify you with the weird starting... Thing. Back to the story!)
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"W..w..why?" I kept watching Kamiko's lips move and her body collapse over and over again. I didn't want it to happen... But that didn't change the fact that it did. Suddenly, I heard a voice... A very familiar... Annoying voice.
"Izumi! Izumi can you hear me?"
And that was the sound of my nii-chan worrying about me. I never thought I would live to see this day. I put on a happy and dumb facade, if I sounded like I knew too much... Bad things would happen.
"Hey, Tami. Izuna's ookaaaaay! Izumi's HAPPY! Izumi HATES snakes!"
"Uh... Are you sure you're okay? You sound... Urm... Weird."
"IZUMI IS OKAY! Izumi is tiiiired. Let her rest. No... wait. IZUMI WANTS TO TALK TO TACHI. GIMME TACHI!"
Right on cue, Itachi came in. "Yes?"
"Nope. Nope nope nope. Izumi wanna talk to 'Tachi ALONE." My family members gave each other worried looks, and hurried out. Probably to get a neurosurgeon or something...
"Thanks, Itachi." I said, losing my stupidly happy voice.
"What for?"
"For being there for me..."
"Always." (SNAPE!)
I loved having these conversations with Itachi, when he only said a few words and yet those few words meant so much to me.
"Remember your fifth birthday, and I said I had a gift for you?"
"Yeah..."
"Well here you go." He handed me a long rectangular package, and inside was a beautiful yet deadly katana. (You know how you should never give weapons to five year olds? Well too bad. This happened. Yay. She probably wasn't gonna use it until later, anyways...)
"It's amazing... Thank you so much!"
"You're welcome..." He said, blushing.
"Well, I have to go take care of Sasuke soon... I'll be back, and we can talk later, I promise. Just rest for now."
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Boring. I know. Please comment? Tried to add fluff. And failed. Miserably. :( I REALLY DON'T KNOW HOW TO WRITE THESE THINGIES!! Shoot. Why am I...? URGH. The book must go on.
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