Paradise Point!

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It was the last but one day before our holiday was over. My dad decided it would be a good idea to go to a theme park to spend some 'quality' time together before we left. I was still extremely annoyed with the whole Facebook situation. I still didn't understand who took it and then hacked into my Facebook account and put it on my profile. I was trying to forget about this with extreme ease. On top of that, all that was going on with my 'dreams'. I knew I wasn't going to have a good day. I didn't want it to ruin the content of my day so as Judy told me, I should try to blank the negative out and focus on the positive, which was me going to a theme park. The thing is, somedays I loved rides and would go on the big adrenaline rides with minimum fear, and then other days I would be petrified of all rides and wouldn't want to go on anything. Today was definitely one of those days where I didn't want to go on anything. I was an emotional wreck, and there was no one who could help me. I felt like the whole world was against me, even the ones I loved. This was definitely the pain that figure said I would go threw in the future. And so, I sat there on the padded fancy wall-mounted chair with all these thoughts emerging in my tiny brain. I snapped out of my daydream only to hear the sound of my dad's overwrought voice yelling "Lil come on, the cars waiting for us". And so I leaped off the chair and headed to the car.

My dad was over excited. We jumped into the car and set off to 'Paradise Point' the theme park we were going to. "You girls better go on rides, I'm not paying good money for you too go on 1 ride" said my dad in a deepened voice. "You can't force them, dear" replied my mum. Amy and I just sat there in silence not wanting to argue about my dad spending loads of money on this trip.

We arrived at the theme park. The car was going to pick us up at 6pm which meant we could spend the whole day here. As we approached the entrance, bustling crowds arose from nowhere chanting "LET US IN! LET US IN!" My dad decided to join in. I was severely embarrassed(not as much as the Facebook malarkey though). I glanced to my right only to see a family of 6. The mother was yelling at the children shouting "We will be going in soon! Stop running around boys! Be patient!". The father was just praying that the kids would stop messing around. At this point Amy was weeping at me with so much laughter. The eldest of the kids was a boy, 15 roughly, just listening to music. The girl, 13, was begging her mum for some money, and the twins were just running around the whole family. Amy and I looked at each other and smiled. That had brightened my day.

We finally got into the theme park. It was 10:45. The atmosphere was already humid and a layer if sweat emerged on my forehead. The first ride my dad was practically running to was called 'Oblivion' and it was ascending vertically and descending vertically with 7 loops and 3 further drops. It was definitely one of the big ones. As there was no queue we decided to go on that one first. They strapped us in tight. I was next to Amy and Mum with my Dad on the end. He was bouncing. Suddenly I heard this voice in my head. "Don't go on this ride. There is a consequence. Get off now. Don't to on this ride". I was seriously freaked out, but I tried to blank it out. For the ascending part of the ride, all I could here was this voice telling me to get off but I couldn't exactly. Then we dropped. It felt like all my worries flew out of me and we were descending 150ft pretty quickly. The rest of the ride was classic and definitely the best ride I had been on in a while. But who was yelling in my ear? Who was speaking to me? The figure? This strange thing that's haunting me? I was confused, but I didn't let it bother my day.

The rest of the day was a blast. We went on rides called Nemesis, Apocalypse, Speed, The Devil, Bounce and Scream. These were all the big rides. On The Devil, I had the voice again. It said, "You are putting your life in danger. You will become what you will experience". I had no idea what that ment, but I wasn't scared. It was now 6pm and we had spent the whole day at the park. It was so much fun! I thanked my parents for taking us there and swiftly jumped into the car ready to go back to the hotel. Today had been definitely the best part of the holiday. We arrived back at the hotel around 7:30pm, enough time for us to freshen up and go for a bite too eat. Overall, it was a good day. Amy and I decided to go for a dip in the pool at 10pm. Our pool was open 24 hours which was good when you had spent the whole day in a sweaty humid place you could take a swim in the pool, whatever time it was. At 11pm I was tired and so went off to bed, leaving my sister out on the balcony with my parents.

I laid in bed thinking about what I heard earlier on today. What was meant by "You will become what you will experience". Does that mean I will become the devil? Or does it mean I will turn into someone nasty and turn everyone against me. I wouldn't do that, I thought to myself and quietly drifted off to sleep.

(A/N - sorry it's not that long! Didn't really know what too write after this! Thanks for following with my book! Will be updating shortly!x)

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