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Louis:
As you walked around, you went into the kitchen. Your put your elbows on the counter, rocking your hips back and fourth as a contraction passed. Louis walked in, and got you something to drink, as well for himself. What you thought was a contraction came on, it felt different. You grabbed Louis' hands and held yourself up for support. "Lou?" You say, and you hear a pop and water runs down your leg. You gasp, and look down. "Uh," you stutter, not really being able to process what just happened. Louis started to laugh because it made you look like you wet yourself. A real, much stronger contraction came on. "This is all your fault," you say, closing your eyes. "I'm so sorry baby girl," he says. He was genuine, he hates seeing you go through all this pain. "It's not your fault, last time I checked I takes two of us for this," you say, rubbing your stomach. He went behind you applied pressure on the bottom of your back, making some of the lain go away.
After many contractions, profanities whispered, apologies accepted, you sat in the living room, on the couch, Louis sat in front of you facing you and squating between your legs as another contraction ripped through your back. You felt the baby move between your pelvis, and moaned. "Oh Lou, he's coming, I need to push," you say. Here it comes.
Liam:
Liam hurried, and went in the back seat, and grabbed your bag. You opened the door, unbuckling yourself as people took pictures and videos. Liam helped you out if the car, and into the hospital. Honestly, even though you guys looked a little rough, you both didn't really care that people were recording you, instagraming, tweeting about you. Liam was worried about getting you inside, where the doctors could take care of you and your son. "Babe, it's okay, slow down, I just need to take a break for a second," you say, crossing the parking lot. Liam helped you inside, and got someone to help you. They took you up to the maternity wing, and got you into a room. Liam took you on the bathroom and helped you put a gown on. "Thanks babe," you say. Liam turned you around, and smiled. "We're having a baby today," he said, kissing you on the lips. "I know, I can't wait," you say excitedly. A contraction the started, so you out you grabbed onto Liam, to help keep yourself up. "Ow Li," you say, closing your eyes. "It's okay, darling. Remember what they showed us in the classes?" He said, rubbing the sides of your bump. You nodded, breathing like the instructor told you to. It helped, but obviously it still hurt. When it was over, Liam took you into the room, and helped you on the bed. The doctor had someone come in and give you an epidural. After that it felt much better. The doctor told you to get some rest, but nether of you were tired because it's eleven in the morning. Every time a contraction came on, Liam would help you through it, telling you that it's worth it and he wishes he could take this for you.
Later on, the doctor came in to examine you. She told you that you were nine centimeters dilated, so only one more to go. "Almost there, sweetheart," Liam said. You nodded, grabbing onto him as another contraction wrapped around your back and thighs. Tears came to your eyes, and you looked up at Liam. "I don't think I can do this much longer Li. It's been hours, and it hurts so bad," you say to Liam, as the tears start falling down your cheeks. "Y/N, you're almost done. Just a little longer, the doctor just told us," He said, using his thumbs to wipe away your tears. You nodded. Liam helped you out of the bed, and into his arms. Another contraction came on, so you grabbed onto his jacket that he was wearing, and began to sway your hips. "Okay, okay, ow Li, he's right there, call the doctor."
Niall:
Once you got to the birth center, Niall called his parents, and your parents, and the boys, and all of your siblings. Right now, only your guys' parent were coming, everyone else will come later when you have Noel. You were only 2 centimeters, so you have a while still. Niall came on the bed with you, and layed down next to you. You put your head in his chest, and smelled the cologne he was wearing. You smiled up at him. "You smell good," you giggle. He chuckled, and put his hand on the back of your head, ringing his fingers through your hair. "It's so relaxing here, you say. He nodded. "Our baby is coming," he said. You smiled, but a contraction came on. You grabbed his shirt, and he felt your body tense up. "It's okay baby. I'm here," he says. When it was over you sighed, filled with relief. "Take a nap Princess, you won't have much sleep after today," he says.
You wake up, to find the doctor in the room. "Hey Y/N, we just need to examine you to see how far along you are okay?" She says. You nod tiredly. You don't see Niall in the room, and began to panic. "Where's Niall?" You ask. "He went to the bathroom, should be back any minute," she says. She stands up, helping you back to your previous position. "You're almost done, about seven centimeters dilated. Three more to go!" She smiles, putting it in your patient chart, and leaving the room as Niall walks in. "Hi baby," he says, coming over to you. "Seven centimeters," you say. He smiles brightly. "Would you like to walk? We can go out in the halls," he suggested. You nodded,"Can you give me my robe?" You say. He gets it out if your bag as you stand up, walking over to him with your IV stand. He helps you put it on , and then takes you out into the hallway. You walk out into the hallway, holding onto Niall's hands the entire time. You got down the the hallways your room was on, and so you turned around and started walking back down. You felt a contraction, and panicked. "Ni, Ni, I need to push," you gasp.
Harry:
"Hi darling," Liam said, coming up and kissing you on the temple. "How are you feeling?" He asked. "Okay. Not bad yet," you smile. The rest of the boys come over to you and give you a hug while Liam went to talk to Harry. "Are you excited for your girls?" Niall asked you, sitting next to you on the bed. You nodded. "Like you can't believe!" You giggle. As another contraction came on, you put your head back on the bed, and closed your eyes. Harry came over, and rubbed your hand, giving you a quick kiss on the lips. You opened your eyes and looked at Niall, who looked at you helplessly. "Comes with the excitement," you lightly smile. Harry went back over to Liam and the other boys with their girlfriends. "Harry, can I sit in the chair? This bed hurts my back," you say. He quickly came over to you, stopping you from moving. "Let me help you," he says. He uncovered you, making sure to not pull on your IV. He helped you roll your IV stand over with you, and covered you up when you sit down. You sighed, feeling much better. The boys all went and sat on your bed, and began talking about their next tour and things like that. All of the wives came and talked to you about the twins. All of a sudden you began to hyperventilate. You tossed your phone down, and Harry squatted down in front of you. "Y/N? What's wrong baby, calm down, tell me what's wrong," he rubbed your arm, telling the boys to get a doctor. "I - I can't - breathe, Harry," you gasp. Your doctor runs in, and puts the breathing mask over your face. Harry lifted you up and into the bed so it was easier for the doctor to examine you. She began running an ultrasound, "Baby A is in distress, I think the other baby's umbilical cord is wrapped around her neck. "We need to get you to an OR Y/N, we have to give you an emergency C-Section," she said. By now, your breathing has gone semi back to normal. You looked up at Harry. "This isn't what we wanted to do, I want to push, please Harry," you say, tears welling in your eyes. "It's okay, babe, you have to do this, for me? Will you do it for me?" He said. You nodded, and he wiped the tears falling down your face.
Zayn:
When you got to the hospital Zayn helped you out, and grabbed the bag. You both walked into the hospital. Luckily no one recognized you guys since it was in the middle of the night. You went inside, and smiled at how excited Zayn was. He was basically shaking with anticipation. You were showed to a room, and filled out the paper work. When you had a contraction he was right there with you. He puts his arms around you, and one hand on the back of your head. "I hate this, putting you through this. I want to take this for you, you shouldn't have to do this," he rambles. "It's okay Z, I can take it," you say, trying to make him feel better. The corners of his mouth rise slightly,"you don't have to be okay all the time Y/N," he says, kissing your lips. "I know, but I'm fine, I promise," you say.
As the hours go by, people come and go, and contractions get stronger. "Zayn," you say, as the newest contraction comes on. He's sitting behind you, rubbing your shoulders and back like he was taught in the classes you guys went to. You relaxed when it ended. "Thank goodness we went to those classes," silently thanking yourself for signing you up. A few minutes later, another one comes on, you you lean forward, putting your elbows on the bed, and rocking back and forward. "Okay, Z, I can't help it, their coming."
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