Only then by chimphony
Review by exodaddykokobop
IMPRESSION BEFORE READING
cover- neat. not at all overdone.
title- matches with the story perfectly.
description- intriguing and matches the story perfectly.
AFTER READING
your story is definitely interesting. the flow is smooth whilst the chapters contain enough information about the scenes written; not many info given at once, nor very less. i particularly liked how you divided your present chapters to your past ones. even your character development was visible.
however, i must say this, the starting point of your story is quite overused on this site. i've read quite a lot of books with sort of the same scene unfolding. maybe try another sort of approach with the same scene?
FOCUSES
writing style-
you write magnificently. your diction is remarkably refined too, making the whole process of reading even better. you didn't overdo anything that could annoy the readers and make them proceed with the tale, so well done!
ADVICE
i've already highlighted the point on After Reading, so try to change it a bit maybe. also, maybe you could try inserting date format instead of writing in all italics for reminiscing chapters. it would be good to see too.
ENDING NOTE
it was an honour to review your work, it truly was. keep up the good work, love!
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