Guys, constructive criticism is one thing, but typing a paragraph telling me what I should have written compared to what I have is really not necessary. If you don't like what I write then there's a simple solution. Don't vote and stop reading. :) . Or, don't comment! I write my stories the way I write them for a reason. Whether it's out of character for Saiki or not, there's a point to it. Maybe it's to get the story going in the direction I want without a hundred chapters? Maybe it's because I wanted to start developing sooner rather than later. If you don't like it then just dOn'T rEaD it. And don't comment and don't vote. There is no reason anyone "needs" to type a paragraph correcting me. It's not a need it's just a compulsive act. And don't say your sorry because of you actually were sorry you wouldn't be correcting me. I do plan to go back and edit things when I finish, but I'll only be correcting things like spelling errors, or drawing some chapters out longer. If you think Saiki told the reader too soon about his powers, then I'm sorry, but that's the way it is. I wanted the characters to be able to talk freely about their powers if they wanted to, and I wanted to use Saiki's powers for sweet moments. I did it for a reason. So yes there will be plenty of times Saiki goes out of character or I use a term that you don't like but just leave it the f*ck alone and assume there's a point to it. I don't care what he would have done in that situation, obviously, because if I have him being a secretive tsundere the entire time the story can't progress the way I intended, and the way most of my readers seem to enjoy.
This is a FANFICTION.
Not the actual show or manga.
FYI I only watched season one. I'm not that great at reading subtitles. This FANFICTION. Takes place in a season one setting. If you want to imagine it in a season two or three setting then fine but don't use any content I haven't watched against me. :)
One more time.
If you don't like it then don't read it. Thanks! 🙏
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Heart vs Mind (Saiki K x Reader)
FanfictionYou're a normal girl with a normal life, well, almost normal. You've always been able to tune in to the emotions of others. Because of that you're able to connect with people easily; but one boy, Kusuo Saiki, is beyond your reach. After being teamed...
