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hey guys ,, this is a final note for this book ,, there will be no more chapters as it's currently complete ~

there's just going to be a couple of things i have to say here ,, read em if you want hehe <3


THANK YOU:
honestly I don't understand how or why people were interested in this book ,, it's still my first one but it's been changed billions and billions of times I can't even count. I am very thankful for all of the support you guys have given despite me taking weeks to upload chapters they still end up getting read so thank you very very much ,, you helped me finish my first book ~~

even if you didn't read all chapters because let's be honest-- who would read all dat crap? -- but anywayss even if you only read one or two or even just the last chapter thank you so so so freaking much. thank you for reading this odd story and taking an interest ,, i love you very much <3

MY FIRST BOOK:
for me this book of mine wasn't at all how I expected it to go ,, I didn't expect to get reads and if I'm being one hundred percent clear... the book wasn't supposed to even have a happy ending lol.

it was actually called In Between the Lines before ,, the chapters made no sense but the storyline wasn't far from how I wrote Broken Glass. like it used to be in different perspectives but I found Lesley's to be the most interesting so I continued on with hers. I actually tried to plan out a proper storyline using notes on my phone and it worked out lol.

the original storyline was supposed to have 40 chapters -- yes forty chapters ,, what was I thinking lmao.

but basically there was supposed to be some kind of explosion during the Championship Tournament ,, with someone who may or may not have betrayed Lesley and everyone ends up fleeing the school. Gusion and Lesley then set off on an adventure together to find the Twilight Orb and something like that then I had this weird Abyss Concept that causes Lesley to die at the end. yep, she was supposed to die, great storyline lol, real great.

I ended up not liking the idea of having a bad ending since things were already pretty dark so I made a huuuge chapter change and yeah !!! that's how we're here woohoo !!!

MALFUNCTIONS:
here are a couple things that would have happened but didn't if your curious hehe...

• a chapter where the Royals go to Eruditio and find out why Saber hated Lancelot ,, supposed to be before chapter thirteen

• Guinevere and Lesley were supposed to become friends back in chapter twenty-six but I got rid of it since it's kinda unrealistic for Les to renew her relationships with three people all in one day

• many people were supposed to die... but didn't ,, in Martis' story in chapter eleven he talked how a lot of people began disappearing and it only left Lesley and Gusion ,, which was supposed to happen but it didn't lols

there are so so so much more but those are the main ones I guess? there is another one but it's kind of a spoiler so I just won't say it hehehe

Q&A:
these questions are for both you and me to answer ,, feel free to comment your opinions and stuff ,, I wanna know what you think !!!

I: what did you think of the book?
lol honestly I didn't really like it ,, it could've been better in terms of storyline but some chapters I was really proud of; mainly the last few because my writing improved ~

II: what chapter was your most favourite and least favourite?
most favourite by far is ch.11: let's get lost ,, the chapter when they all go to Ember Island ,, it's my favourite one because of the way I wrote it and all of the funny little scenes lol

other favourites would be ch.7 ,, ch.20 ,, and maybe the last one ch.28

least favourite by far is ch.12 ,, ironic how it's the one directly after my most favourite lmao. I didn't like it because I felt like I could've changed a lot of things and it was hard to write the chapter since so many things happened in ch.11

III: who's your favourite character?
my favourite character by far is probably Alice ,, mainly because of how she was easily distinctive from the others and her personality in general ,, but my opinion might change because of something that's gonna happen heh

IV: what was your favourite thing about the book?
probably the humour and all of the funny scenes I added ,, although I don't know if it helped me or hurt me since it was a little difficult to transition into more serious scenes

those are all the questions I came up with... feel free to ask your own and comment your thoughts and such <3

THE SEQUEL:
lastly... will there be a sequel?

uM I don't know actually ,, it's about a 60-70% chance I'll make one. I kind of wanted to make other stories that are different since I spent a more than a year on this one and I'm a little sick of it lolol

if there will be a sequel... here are a couple things to note;

• it will be in third person
• it's going to focus more on the Twilight Orb and that kind of story
• the main ship will no longer be gusion x lesley ,, but instead leomord x lunox

if I don't make a sequel ,, I can just make the idea a separate book since it's that different hehe ~~

I'm not really sure if I will or not ,, I do have another story idea that I've been wanting to do but I don't have anything planned right now ,, so we'll see !!!


and that's all folks !!!
yep the book is finally over i know ,, and i said this before but thank you so so so much for all the support friends and thanks for even reading this little author's note too that's getting long ~~

don't forget to love yourself too guys !!!

lots of love,
yadira chan <3



p.s;; i changed the cover for the thousandth time lmao ,, and even the font for a bunch of things... try-hard aesthetic gurl yadi XD

p.p.s;; oh by the wayyy the answer to the now deleted prologue (haha) is lOve ,, i forgot what i asked in the prologue but it's lOovE <3

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