Guys, I feel like my writing and pacing is kinda off. Also how the characters speak.
Any advice or is the writing fine as it is?
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A virus, a quirk and two young boys (Prototype x MHA crossover)[UNDER REWRITE]
Fanfiction"It is the obligation of those born strong to protect the weak. Never forget that. And whatever you do, never... become the monster I had to be." But it was the destiny of the Prototypes. We all...became monsters in the end. What was the saying agai...
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Guys, I feel like my writing and pacing is kinda off. Also how the characters speak.
Any advice or is the writing fine as it is?