A Second Chance At Romance - HiddlestonGirl

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Title: A Second Chance At Romance

Author: HiddlestonGirl

Genre: Non-Teen Fiction/Romance

Summary: Sydney wouldn't have expected what's about to happen to her life after meeting Henry, the Greek god tycoon. Her past and her present is about to collide in away she hadn't thought possible. What will she do if she's caught between two gorgeous men who are both fighting for her affection? How will she shake off her past while it's trying to catch up to her. Will she be able to sort her life out? Will she choose the right man, or will she make the biggest mistake of her life? Will she ever find out the cause of her husband's death?

My view:

- Title: A little bit too long for my taste, but it still gets the point across. It's shorter than a lot of titles I've seen out there - you Wattpadians with great big long huge titles should be ashamed of yourselves! (four out of ten)

- Summary: Interesting summary. Seems to be just slightly bordering on cliche - but that's just with the whole triangle of love thing. Not that I don't love this cliche. It's lot's of fun to play about with. It's just slightly over-used though, and I know how hypocritical I sound - considering that my story has a triangle of lurrveee - but I suppose a lot of people tend to get bored of them. I found the summary to be quite interesting. (five out of ten)

- Description: Descriptions were just slightly flawed. I found the writing to be a little... hard. Like when you bite into a pizza thinking it's going to be soft and chewy with all that melted cheese... when in reality, it's like biting into a piece of carboard. Dissapointing and annoying. The descriptions could really use a little work and the whole story just has a feel of awkwardness to it and could really use some fleshing out. (three out of ten)

- Characters: The characters were pretty good I suppose. They, like the descriptions, could use a little work, but I found them to be realistic enough to keep my entertained and reading. I think character interactions were good and I found myself liking most of the characters.(five out of ten)

- Plot: (six out of ten)

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