I got back from the hospital a few weeks later and I noticed this guy. He was surrounded by a bunch of other people I had never even seen him before though. He was tan and really tall is say maybe 6 foot or something like that, he had black hair and brown eyes. He also had a 6 pack and was incredibly handsome. I had never seen anyone like him before I had to get to know him before another girl took my chance. Now was my time to strike so I limped up to him (even though I was completely fine by now).
Cody's p.o.v (The guy River saw)
I was standing in the middle of all my new friends and then I saw this girl. She had shoulder length blond straight hair and blue eyes. She was sort of tall probably "5" 2 I don't really know she was shorter than me though. She was also very beautiful I wonder if she has a boyfriend. Oh who am I kidding she has to have a boyfriend she's so beautiful how can she not have a boyfriend. I'd never really go down that road with her though maybe we could be friends. I was about to walk up to her and then I saw her limping up to me. Oh are you okay?
No my ankle hurts really bad.
Oh here let me help you.
Okay if you insist.
Here ill take you to the beds.
And then I picked her up and carried her in my arms. She was so happy it looked like she was going to explode if she got any more happier.
Hey are you okay? You look drunk.
Yea I'm okay. And no I'm not drunk I am surprised however that you picked me up.
Well your in so much pain.
Oh yea my ankle.
So what happened any way?
And as he said that my heart melted what was I going to tell him I didn't want to lie. But i didn't want to tell the truth either.
Well what happened was....
NARRATOR:you could hear the thump as river hit the floor
RIVER!!!!!! RIVER!!!!!! CAN YOU HEAR ME?!?!?!?!? SOMEONE HELP!!!!!!!!
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If I was divergent
FanficThis is what it would be like if I was divergent in dauntless. All rights go to Veronica Roth (completed)