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off-screen

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after about a four-hour
flight, jonah and luna
arrive in minneapolis-saint paul
international airport. while en route
to stillwater, luna looks out of the
uber window into the distance.

jonah: what's on your mind?

luna: nothing much. just hoping your family will like me.

jonah: they won't.

jonah pauses and for a
brief second, panic spreads
across luna's face. he laughs.

jonah: they're going to love you. i'm so sure of it.

as much as i do, jonah thinks
in his head. he grabs her hand
reassuringly and luna goes
back to looking out the window.
soon enough, the bustling metropolis transitioned to a more quiet, suburban
town. snow blanketed most
of the ground and the trees.

jonah: we're here!

luna takes a deep breath
and steps out of the car. after
unloading her luggage, she
sees two faces and a dog
peeking through the window.
the door opens and the dog
makes a beeline for the two of them.

jonah: sawyer!

a rambunctious labrador jumps
up to him, tail wagging so quickly
it looked like a blur. soon after, he
sees luna and begins sniffing
curiously. this only lasted two
seconds and he soon jumped to
greet luna too. luna kneels down
to scratch behind his ears and
sawyer responds with licks.

svea: aww he likes you!

jonah's sisters, esther and
svea, appear soon after and
attack jonah simultaneously
with tight bear hugs.

jonah: i missed you guys so much!

esther: not as much as we did! oh, mom and dad feel terrible for not being able to be home on time, but they'll be home later. we got the rooms ready for the two of you.

jonah: it's so great to be home. oh, and I'd like you guys to meet luna, my—

svea: GIRLFRIEND. it's so nice to finally meet you!

svea hugs luna just as
tight and lets go to stand
next to jonah. they start
messing around in the
snow when esther comes
up to luna.

esther: we've heard so much about you. great things, we're really happy you're here. Pause. i've always wanted a big sister!

luna smiles widely. and
suddenly, all the apprehension
she had before coming here
disappeared. this already
felt like a second home.

luna: well, you have one in me. i'm so excited to be here and to get to know all of you!

esther and luna finally
embrace, until they are hit
with snowballs.

luna: you guys did *not* just do that!

jonah prepares another
snowball in his hand.

jonah: oh, but we did.

he high fives svea and
the two laugh. esther and luna
look at each other knowingly. it
isn't long before luna pelts
jonah with a snowball. right
in the face.

jonah: that's quite the aim you've got there.

luna: eh, i might've dabbled in softball for a year back in high school.

jonah: and i'm just learning of this now... why?

luna prepares another
snowball in her hand
with a smirk on her face.

luna: didn't think it was important!

before she could throw, she
is hit on the shoulder with
another ball. this meant war.

luna: okay, bring it on!

an all out snowball fight
ensues, and luna can't
remember the last time
she had laughed this hard.
this was going to be a
trip to remember;
she was sure of it.

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A/N: just a short little blurb
to start the minnesota chapters
off! also, I'd like to make
an exciting announcement!

I'm writing a short Jonah
Christmas story! it's called
The Next Fourteen Hours!

this has been in my unpublished drafts FOREVER, even before I started writing hello, goodbye! i'm so excited to bring this story to life with a Christmas twist

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this has been in my unpublished
drafts FOREVER, even before I
started writing hello, goodbye! i'm
so excited to bring this story
to life with a Christmas twist.
the story in its ENTIRETY will
be released on Christmas Eve!
the author's note has been
published now and you can
read more about it there.

as always, thank you all for reading!
see you in the next chapter!

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