The Fog

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   The Fog

I’m starting to realize this was a very bad idea. My friends and I thought it would be a good idea to go out in the woods at 12:00 a.m. and just to walk around. Well this started out fun and then got bad real quick. “Hey Jake did you see those eyes over there too?”

“No what are you talking about Andrew?”

¨Jake! I swear theres eyes over there look!”. Then Colin decides to chime in.

“Don't listen to Andrew, he always tries to pull theses tricks and tries to scare us.”

Then I said, “Whatever you guys want to believe, but if that thing tries to kill us it’s not

my fault!” So we keep walking on talking about sports and then suddenly it became real foggy and musty. We all stopped, standing really close so we didn't get lost.

“Well guys, what should we do?’ Collin said sounding a little scared.

“I’m honestly not sure I cant see my hand infront of my face “ said Andrew. The fog was so thick we did not even know where to go. Then out of no where a screeching sound of wolves howling so loud it sounded like they were right beside us.

“Okay guys I think it is time we go home,” said Jake. Yeah but which way is home?.The fog became so thick that nobody knows where to go. ¨I say we go right¨ said jake. After walking for a while something bad happened.

As we were walking through the woods Colin turned around to say something to andrew and he was gone.

¨ANDREW!!¨ Colin screamed. He was behind them laying on the ground dead! Nobody heard or saw anything.

¨OMG what do we do?¨ asked Jake. We need need to get out of here fast, and need to find help!¨ now Jake and Colin are running through the woods. They found a field and they ran all the way to the end of it.

¨A road !¨ screamed Colin.

Then headlights appear! Colin stood in the road. The car stopped, noticing him. ¨We are in trouble mister,¨ said Colin. ¨what seems to be the problem?¨ asked the old man. ¨Our friend is dead in the woods and we came to find help,¨ said Colin. I’ll call the police and you two jump in my truck. As we led the police and the man to our friend. We slowly crept through the foggy woods. As animals chattered all around us, we got to andrew and he was standing up looking really confused as we were the same. ¨Andrew?¨Colin asked, questionably.

¨You were dead!!¨ said Jake.

¨No?¨ I fell and got mud in my mouth and couldn't talk , you guys left and I did not know where you went so I stayed where I was.

¨Thankfully we came back for you ,¨ said Jake.

¨True,¨ Colin added in. ¨well we better get home our parents are probably worried sick about us.¨ Yeah lets go!¨ said everybody including the police and the old  man. Well we all got grounded for going out and not coming back for a long time. Thankfully everything turned out okay.

By Ben Herman

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