Hey, loves. Thank you for giving this book a shot.
After two years I decided to rewrite this book into a more improved version.
I realized that the original draft( the one I wrote in 2020) had so many plot holes and unnecessary characters. Some things in the original version made me cringe super hard lol. It's why this version is going to be different from the first. A lot of things are going to change.
Warning.
This book will have themes of bullying, sexual assault, mentions of self harm, homophobia and other triggering themes. So read at your own risk.
Most importantly, this book is a gay romance so expect same sex mature scenes. Don't worry, I will put a warning at the beginning of mature chapters. If you are not comfortable reading such mature scenes, you are free to skip the R-rated chapters. Otherwise most of the book is pretty decent lol.
Also, this book will have tons of humor so please be prepared to laugh till your ribs crack. I mean it.
I will be using both the past and present tense while writing this book. I am more comfortable using those two tenses to portray scenarios in the book. I hope that won't be confusing.
Since this is a rewrite, some comments were written in 2020(for the old version of TSS) it's why some of them won't be matching with the chapters of the rewritten version.
Enjoy the read and don't forget to vote and comment. I love comments, they absolutely make my day.
Also, tag people who you think might like the book. It will really help to spread the word out there.
REVIEWS
These are some of the reviews that have been left in the chapters by my readers:
1. Lovely chapter as always. One thing I love about this book, it's the story of the writer. I don't get bored to read the cheesy teen banter as I do in most teen fiction stories I've tried. They usually drain my patience with unnecessary (or maybe necessary per standards) dialogues. I hate reading many characters in one scene, but I'm baffled that each one in this book has some sort of impact in the chapter so the experience becomes wonderful! I always read with a smile and so kuddos to you, Fefe.
2. wow, Faith. The re-write of TSS. My oh my how you've grown as a writer. The flow is wonderful and I like the depth of the characters... sure I will be all caught up in a few days! Well done.
3. I absolutely loved it honestly, its so good and thank YOU for sharing your work with us.
4. I've actually loved this book sm. it's funny and I love the characters sm. I will adopt both of them if needed they are adorable. Ur a really good writer and I hope to check out more books in the future xx
5. Great job dear on this chapter. It captured all the emotions and I never cry and I teared up a little when Gavin spoke about how he felt. You are an amazing author. 👏 ❤️
6. I can't really describe how amazing you bring up your characters and how you're amazing at it.
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