Author's Note: Most of the comments were about the old and raw version of the book, please be advised.
Hi! It's been so long, and life just got so much busier. I also had a writing slump especially for this story, so I revised a couple of things again. But now, I got back and I might be updating more again for Celandine's story (no promises haha).
Thank you so much for your love and support, and for the very long wait. Here's a new and I can say the version that I am most proud of for this story.
Happy reading!
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"Do you know what it takes to be considered strong?" My sister asked. She has this white fringe that reaches her brows, the hair beside her head reaches her chin, her hair behind reaches her waist.
I shook my head. "Hindi po. What is it?" I asked curiously.
Courtney Snow looked at me. "It's the acceptance of your own fears, and you're just a human who can feel pain. And only those who can overcome fear are considered the strongest."
Ten years later...
Agad kong naramdaman ang pagbulusok ng maraming ice spikes sa direksyon ko na agad kong iniwasan. Akala ko ay matatapos na ang atake niya pero nakita ko pang may mga yelo na galing sa lupa ang papunta sa direksyon ko. I quickly jumped on a nearby tree to avoid it. My breathing becomes heavy habang tumatagal ang laban namin ni Doris.
I felt another attack that was directed at me which made me leave the tree that I'm staying at. My hands aggressively moved into the air and created an ice wall rushing onto her, but she hastily confronted it with another ice wall which caused a huge crash as it collided.
Mabilis akong tumayo dahil nakarating na agad sa harapan ko si Doris. I blocked her attack using ice energy forming between my hands. She started attacking me in different directions as I tried to dodge everything, as if not wanting to let me make my move. I really think she does.
Bigla siyang nawala sa harapan ko and I took it as a chance for me to cope up with her speed and find an opening. When I was just about to face my back where I felt her presence, a cluster of ice spikes were already centimeters away from me. Iiwasan ko pa lang ang mga iyon nang biglang sumulpot si Doris sa kanan ko while swinging a forged ice sword.
I used my left hand to control the ice spikes and made them stop, while my right hand, covered with ice energy, blocked Doris' attack. Bago pa siya makaalis ay tinanggal ko agad ang kamay ko na humaharang sa kanyang espada at hinayaang lumapit ang trajectory ng ice spikes niya papunta sa kanyang direksyon.
Mabili niya iyong naiwasan samantalang kinuha ko ang oras na iyon para sumabay sa ice spikes. I saw an opening and immediately made my way to her. Just when I was about to launch an attack, she smirked at me as if she saw me coming.
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