hey, the chapters after this are going to be the storyline from the original story and then after chapter 30 the new rewritten versions starts. im going to be really really slow with these updates, im so sorry, but i just felt it was unfair that the new readers had to read this without a proper ending (even if the old version was a pile of horse shit)
i'll mark the new version chapters with an asterisk (*) so u can easily differentiate.
The original storyline (chapters 1-30) wont fit in with the stories description as that was the storyline for the new, rewritten version. The storyline for the original: Dash tells the Wonderbolts about her past and they have to protect her, however, dash ends up being taken and the Wonderbolts and mane six work together in order to find Dash and bring her back to safety, all the while being deceived by the royal guard sent by Princess Celestia to protect Dash.
Also, hello new readers, pls dont be too harsh on the criticism for the original version of this story i was 13 when i first wrote 💀 the (not complete) rewritten one is much better my 17 year old ass defo improved i promise.
that's all guys ty. this book is a HUGE ASS FUCKING GODDAMN MESS i know urgh🤦🏻♀️ but im trying.
okay bye bye thank u
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