* Chapter 1: Wonderbolt Practice

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OKAY! so everyone who is here after reading the first, shitty part of the story and are back for the less shitty, but nevertheless shitty re-written version of the story, y'all are gonna have to pretend that Under a Rainbow's Wing and Far and Beyond haven't been written yet. anyone anyone who is reading this for the first time...uh... ignore this message tyvm.

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The Wonderbolts were out on there training grounds practicing for an upcoming wonderbolts tour. Celestia's sun was at its peak in the sky, shining down on the group of Pegasus.

"Ugghh If this day gets any hotter I might just melt" Fleetfoot whined, sweat running down from her forehead down towards her cheek.

"FLEETFOOT YOUR GETTING OUT OF FORMATION!!" Spitfire bellowed as she blew her whistle as loud as she could.

"Alright Spitty, calm down! Geez!" Fleet replied with an eye roll. Dash and Mistyfly chuckled at Fleet's childish whining.

Indeed it was really hot outside, the weather was probably the hottest ever recorded, and Spitfire wasn't helping by giving them the hardest most exhausting routine ever with only a 5-minute break every 1 hour. Even though the practice was hard work, the 'Bolts always felt a sense of Pride for how far and how long they had waited to achieve their lifelong dream. The Wonderbolts were like family to each other, and they wouldn't trade it for anything else.

"ALRIGHT GUYS TIME FOR THE FINALE, THE
SONIC RAINBOOM, CRASH YOU READY?" Spitfire asked.

RainbowDash flinched as "Crash" reached her ears, but shook her head and smiled "Yes Ma'am," Dash saluted.

Still haven't gotten used to that nickname.

The Wonderbolts drew a flower from the smoke coming out their suites before they dispersed and Dash flew at rapid speed through the middle. Once she was confident she was at a suitable height she began diving down in a straight verticle line. A cone started to form around her, as all of the bolts stared wide-eyed waiting for the so-called 'mares tail' and soon enough, the cone pierced creating a loud BOOM and flooding the sky with a bright Rainbow covering the skies of Equestria, leaving the bolts staring in awe at the set of colours which flew over them and disappeared into the setting sun.

RainbowDash landed smoothly down towards the ground as all the Wonderbolts came galloping towards her.

"DASHIIEEE THAT WAS SO COOOOLLL!!" Suprise came in a bought Dash in for a really tight hug. Suprise always reminded Dash of Pinkie Pie not only in their similar attitudes but also their similar looks, Suprise was a complete doppelganger of Pinkie.

"Hehe, Thanks, Slowpoke," RainbowDash replied with a mischevious smirk as she used Surprises Wonderbolt nickname.

"HHEEYYYYYYYYYY, IM NOT SLOWWWW!!" Suprise pouted at Dash.

I'm still convinced her and Pinkie are related.

Dash and all the rest of the wonderbolts all quietly chuckled as Spitfire approached Dash and gave her a firm pat on the back.

"That was pretty impressive Crash, great work." Spitfire praised her with a smile.

If only you all knew how much that nickname haunts me...

Dash sighed, she was interrupted from her thoughts as Spitfire blew her whistle again.

"Gahh, fuck Spitty you blew your whistle right in my ear" Fleetfoot complained as she yanked her ears down towards her head.

"Sorry fleet, anyways, EVERYPONY LETS HIT THE SHOWERS AND YOU ALL CAN HAVE THE REST OF THE DAY OF FOR YOUR HARD WORK," Spitfire yelled.............again.

The Wonderbolts were all used to her shouting now, they never quite understood why she loves to shout even when she doesn't need to, but hey, Spitfire wouldn't be Spitfire without her unnecessary yelling now would she?

"Gosh, she really does love shouting doesn't she?" Soarin snorted as he walked next to RainbowDash into the locker rooms attached to the showers.

"Yeah and don't forget her whistle" Dash giggled.

Gosh, she looks so cute when she giggles, and those eyes I could stare at them all day...

Soarin thought as a light blush appeared on his face.

RainbowDash noticed that Soarin was now staring at her and she turned her head only to meet his emerald eyes staring down at her magenta ones.

Whoa, I never knew how beautiful his eyes were.

The pair suddenly noticed they were staring at each other and suddenly coughed awkwardly and looked away with a goofy smile and a red tint that refused to leave their faces. Fleetfoot and Spitfire both smirked as they watched the pair walk into the locker rooms, having seen the whole exchange as they were right behind them.

"Yo, spitty" Fleet whispered.

"Yes, Fleet" Spitfire replied.

"Do you think those two like each other?" Fleet asked.

"Yes Flatfoot, welcome to 2 Years ago," High Winds who appeared on Fleetfoots right said with an eye roll.

"Remember when I asked for your opinion? Yeah me neither" Fleetfoot glared at the fire headed mare. It was true that most of the Wonderbolts knew that Rainbow Dash and Soarin had a "more than friends feelings" for each other ever since the Royal Wedding when they shared their small dance together, no matter how much they objected saying they didn't have a crush on each other everypony else knew otherwise.

"Shut up!" High Winds hissed. Which only made Fleetfoot glare harder. High Winds and Fleetfoot didn't really ever get along, they were like frenemies, sometimes they would be happy and talking and other times they would get into petty arguments like right now. "Honestly, I try my hardest to see things from your perspective, but truth be told I just can't get my head that far up my ass." Winds glared.

"Well, Windy, I'm pretty sure your ass would be jealous of all the shit that comes out of your mouth!" Fleetfoot responded with a smirk.

"Someday I hope you go far.......and stay there" High Winds scowled at Fleetfoot, she knew full well she was losing the argument against Fleet. With Fleetfoot the argument was lost before it even began.

"What was that Blazey I can't hear you over the sound of how amazing I am," Fleet replied while bouncing her eyebrows twice.

Spitfire only chuckled at the two arguing mares. Just like the Wonderbolts being used to hearing Spitfire shout all the time, Spitfire was used to the two mares arguing all the time but she knew that deep down those two cared for each other just as all the other Bolts cared for each other.

{To be Continued}

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