ahhhh thank u all so much for ur kind words!! you're all so supportive and understanding and i honestly don't know what else to say aside from that i really appreciate it and i really really love u all to forever and back :( thank u so much for being patient with me all the time and for believing in me
i have some good news!! i thought i'd update everyone on the book to share my progress! i've started editing and so far i have changed a few things but the "major" changes are in chapter 4
*i've added a scene where taehyung and jaemin make conversation during the school tour on jaemin's first day. this is the beginning of the chapter (pic 1 = old ver, pic 2 = new ver)
*i've replaced the conversation between taehyung and kriti with taehyung's thoughts and ideas about hiring someone to work for him as a replacement for kriti (pic 1 = old, pic 2 = new)
*i've changed the way taehyung approaches seokjin about working for him (pic1= old, pic2=new)
^that's how the chapter ends but in chapter 5 they're going to discuss everything and tae will still resort to blackmail because i want to keep that scene where he burns the contract to test seokjin
i basically changed the whole chapter :p
personally i prefer the new version but let me know ur thoughts! feedback and constructive criticism are totally welcome :)
note: i have unpublished all the unedited chapters but i'll be publishing them one by one or a few at a time when i'm at least 90% satisfied with the edited version !
i guess satisfaction and motivation have some kind of correlation sjdjfjg
anywwaaaaaay again, i love u all so so much!! BORAHAE!!!!! uwu
(btw can we all please have streaming parties for this night and try to get it to 30m streams before the 1 yr anniversary??)
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FAMILY | on hold
FanficKim Seokjin, 32, is a single father. He works two shifts, seven days a week, as a cook at a small Korean cuisine restaurant to provide for his 3 sons that he loves and cherishes wholeheartedly. He's not necessarily struggling financially as he's abl...