REVIEW#76
GENRE: FANFICTION, JHS
BY: ghostair
STATUS: ONGOING
RATE: 8/10
CONTAINING: boyxgirl, simple plot, sad, short story
SUMMARY:
Not knowing what to do, he would just keep lighting candles to return her gaze back to him just like a lost traveller desperate in search of shelter. She was his shelter
REVIEW:
Again another what the flower moments. I really think the author should straight up make a book full of stories like this, I mean it's really simple and it's really touching, but in my opinion, I really like Illuminating heart rather than candlelight. No, it's not because of the characters because I love all of them (stan them all or you don't stan them at all tbh). I really think that illuminating heart has a feeling of connection with the ending that's why when readers read the illuminating heart they actually felt like being in a rollercoaster.
Don't get me wrong I think candlelight is really good but I just can't help to feel the emotion of the entire story, personally I think the ending of candlelight is more tragic since it's more tragic it needs a tragic story so I'll be able to absorb the story so when I read the ending I will really feel the ending. But this is once again personal opinion. But overall It's a really good short story and needs more recognition.
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