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SAVE ME OR WRECK ME

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by AgentCALM

by AgentCALM

REVIEW#81

GENRE: FANFICTION, JUNGKOOKxREADER

BY: EmilyChalla

STATUS: COMPLETED
RATE: 8/10
CONTAINING: boyxgirl, cursing, violence

SUMMARY:

"From the first time I saw you I knew that you would either save me from being a weird person, or you would wreck me and make me become even weirder."~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Y/N has a rough past and Jungkook reminds her of that. They also belong in the same mafia. But when a completely unexpected event happens, will they manage to cooperate, or they will keep on fighting?[This is my first fanfic and English isn't my first language, so I am sorry if there are any mistakes!]

REVIEW:

After reading the whole book after a lot of things happening in the plotline, I'm very happy with the ending. But I would like to address some things in the book that I think can be improved.

First, after looking a bit into the author, I can relate when the author's first language is not English, so as usual there will be a bit grammatical errors and since the book is completed, it would be a good time to re-check the grammar a bit. It might be hard since it's not your first language but asking someone for help will help you.

Second, while reading the story I see that the POV's likes to change a lot, I think it will be good for aesthetic if you skip the part of the scene, it will make the book easier for the eyes to read (so we don't get tired) and it will make it more aesthetic.

Third, I see that the plot of the book is a bit complicated and some scenes are very unpredictable which is good. But there is some part that is a bit confusing, so I hope the author could elaborate on what it means.

But overall the book itself is really good and I think after reading some of the author's note, I'm glad you didn't give up halfway. It's important to be consistent and I'm impressed with the author.