REVIEW#88
GENRE: FANFICTION
BY: -GURLINBLCK-
STATUS: ONGOING (REWRITING)
RATE: 8/10
SUMMARY:
"I have you and you have me. It's us against the world."
REVIEW:
First of all, tI would like to thank you for the patience and yes I've read the book before since it was in my award and I still enjoy reading this rewritten one, for one I do have to say I'm in love with the authors book covers I would have given it a 10/10 very aesthetic.
For the story itself I will be reviewing base on what you have now, so it might be different rveview from before and the future. But as for now I have to say I really like the aesthetic of the book, it's really enjoyable to read and it makes me interested on reading the book. Again a cover is very important cause it will attract the readers.
Now for the story itself since I will be reviewing with what the author has now, I have to say base on grammar it's okay there are no mistake that I should point out and the grammar usage is also universal so there are no hard words that might confuse readers that might not understand( because it wasn't their first language). The beginning of the story is also intriguing because now I want to know what's going on.
All I can advise the author is, since you are re-writing I can't asked you to change your plot or anything but a minor improvement on the situation, I hope you can elaborate more on the feelings and the situation so it would make the readers understand the situation more.
Overall it's already really good and I'm rooting for your book and your success! Happy writing!
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