FOUR LINE POETRY CHALLENGE

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SirKwa:

I come with lone lines
To tell you loners
"You got no lines"
"You are just attention seekers"

Odus:

Someone please call for forensic
look for the remains of an amateur
he came to a fierce war calling us lone
himself he was not accompanied

Sirkwa:

Your lines, none can hum
But mine come with rhythm
Yet you claim to know poetry
Go practise poultry

Odus:

huh, you talk of rhythm
here you came with critism
but i promise to clear your optimism
with zeal and enthusiasm

Sirkwa:

Son, go learn
Poetry is an art
Prowess you must earn
Or else it's you I will thwart

Odus:

you have turned diss into advice
abomination calling a grandmaster son
wait, am i talking to a ghost?
where's the forensic? he survived?

Sirkwa:

Your lines don't frighten
But mine, it's you they enlighten
Reminding you often
You must be COMPETEN'

Odus:

you're pleased to have rhyme schemes
like form ones their 1st poems
your enlightenment is darkness
even with spectacles i don't get your competence

Sirkwa:

After my each blow,
Off you go.
As I ,in my victory I wallow
Just accept, poetry zone is a no go

Odus:

victory, you proclaim
a white flage, you raise
sweaty fingers, you type
ovethinking, you stress

Sirkwa:

Surrender is my advice
Take it if you are wise
Or soon is your demise
And I'll be there to rejoice

Odus:

look you ask me to surrender
when you see I'm to put you asunder
and leave your mind a quagmire
keep my respect as Master

Sirkwa:

Stubbornly you insist
Throwing allegations that don't exist
Can't you see it's a lost cause
Sure, your surrender I'll cause

Odus:

he escapes to prayer
to ask poetic lines from Allah
and forgiveness for misbehavior
he has messed with the master

In collaboration with TheOdundo

Now ladies and gentlemen, who won?

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