Deleted Scenes

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First of all, I really miss this story! I'll get some comments and start responding and just ugh the nostalgia. Anywho, here are some deleted scenes! These are things I planned to put in the story but never got around to. I'm also listing some things that would have happened if there was a sequel!

READ THE ENDING AUTHOR'S NOTE FOR AN IMPORTANT FUN THINGY!

Deleted Scenes:

- Connor was supposed to be the drummer and Emma was the guitarist but I fucked up.

- But female drummers are rad and yeah.

- Mr. Sparkson was the guy in the alley who beat up Skye that one time. I forgot to bring this up in later chapters.

- Mr. Sparkson was the one who had told Skye's mother about her being in Chicago.

- Aaron has sleeves of tattoos.

- Skye is the only one from a suburb and not a city (Emma is from Boston, and Connor and Aaron are from Chicago)

- Skye was going to wear Ryan Ross style eyeliner on stage.

- Skye, Ryan and Rose were going to have PTSD. I only put a few signs in there, I would have gone into more detail, but with everything else going on it was a lot.

- More songs that I was going to quote were: Part II by Paramore and Welcome To My Life by Simple Plan.

- Pete was originally supposed to be hospitalized towards the end of the story.

- This was either going to be in place of Patrick being hospitalized, or right before it.

- I never planned to make the story more than 20 chapters long.

- If anyone has seen Key & Peele Substitute teacher (I'll put it on the side), you'll know what I'm talking about here: I JUST REALIZED LIKE A FEW DAYS AGO THAT I SHOULD HAVE MADE SKYE CALL AARON AYE-AYE-RON

- Out of all of the band names I thought of, the first half were from songs and the next half were from the interwebs.

- The different band names I thought of were: 16 Candles, Misguided Ghosts, Firefly, Love Drunk, Me Afraid, Revolution, Not Real, Yellow Fever, Harmful If Swallowed, 7 Days A Week, Patent Pending, Ministry of Magic.

- There were like 20 different titles I wanted to use for this but I don't know where I put the list (This is why I use a notebook now)

- I'm currently in the process of trying to get rid of every typo so if you see this story updates it probably isn't really, sorry.

- I never realized how big this story would get.

- Seriously the epilogue has over 200 comments.

- And if you search Fall Out Boy on wattpad it's #15, and if you search Patrick Stump it's #15. It changes a lot, but it's usually in that range, which means it's either at the bottom of the first page or the top of the second. (15 per page)

- Emma is bi curious

- Emma was going to kiss Skye, I never decided if it should be when she was drunk or if when she was sober, and ended up leaving it out.

- I was supposed to do a couple more Aaron or Connor POVs

- Connor isn't played by Connor Franta sorry. If you go back to Chapter Fourteen, Skye describes Connor's appearance.

- Skye was going to get her period in the middle of the night and would have to run out and buy pads and shit at 2 AM because she lives with 2 guys.

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