Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!
Cover: 10/10. I absolutely love your cover! Great job on that:)
Grammar: 10/10 I did not see any mistakes though, I may have skipped over some.
Descriptions:9/10 I love how you added the characters backstories. you also did a good job on describing the rooms they were in. one tip would be describing what people looked like a little more, which you may have done later on in the book.
Characters: 10/10 I love your characters and how you make it were we can feel their emotions
Real life situations?: 10/10 can definitely happen in real life
Cliche: 10/10 not so far!
Total: 59/60
Final review: I don't have much to critique in your book because it was absolutely amazing. One tip I did have was explaining the characters looks a little better which you may have done later on in the book but I haven't gotten that far yet. Your book has been amazing so far and I will definitely be finishing it off. Great job!!
Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)
YOU ARE READING
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