Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!
title 10/10
book cover 10/10 very creative!
blurb 10/10 loved the blurb
opening 10/10
grammar 10/10 I didn't see many errors at all
characters 10/10 you really did great with the characters and even went into their backstory, I love that!
Descriptions 10/10
enjoyment 10/10 I gotta admit, I don't read too much fan-fiction but yours was great!!
total 80/80
notes: I actually don't even have notes, your book is really good! you did an amazing job!
Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)
YOU ARE READING
Lauryn's Book Reviews
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