@Dhanu_shyamindi
Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!
Cover: 9/10 your cover looked amazing. good job to whoever made it!! the only thing is that you can clearly see the word 'the' but otherthan that it's great!
Title: 10/10 it was simple yet intriguing.
Opening: 10/10 the opening was amazing and really pulled you into the story.
Blurb//summary: 7/10 your blurb was good but I would've liked to know a summary of the story itself than spoilers.
Characters: 8/10 I felt we were left out a little bit of who they character are.
Grammar: 10/10
Descriptions: 10/10
Enjoyment: 10/10 I really enjoyed it. you picke
Total: 74/80
Final review:
Usually horror books aren't my favorite; don't get me wrong I love horror movies but the books hit different. I believe that horror books are so hard to write and actually make realistic but you did great on it. I didn't have too much to critic about your book. I would like to see more of the characters though!
Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)
YOU ARE READING
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