Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not meant to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!
Title 10/10 Perfect for this book
Book cover 10/10 Amazing book cover
Blurb 10 /10 It tells us all we need to know and really captivates the reader.
Opening 10/10 Absolutely amazing and captivating.
Grammar 10/10
Descriptions 10/10 You described everything so well/
Enjoyment 10 /10
Notes: Your book pulled me in from the first paragraph. You're a really good writer, keep it up!
Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)
YOU ARE READING
Lauryn's Book Reviews
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