title: 5/10 I didn't fully understand the title.
book cover: 10/10 I love your cover, really goes well with the book.
blurb//summary: 7/10 It was pretty short but it did summarize the story well.
opening: 10/10
grammar: 10/10 I didn't see ant mistakes!
characters: 10/10
descriptions: 10/10 I felt like I was truly in the story which I enjoyed
enjoyment: 10/10 I could definitely sit down and read through it
Total: 72/80
Final review:Your short stories are super good and i definitely think you could turn them into a full detailed book if you wanted too!
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