Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!
Cover: 10/10. I love your cover and I also love how you put 'from the mind of clowdy Parker' also is that your real name? it's really unique!
Grammar: 8/10. I didn't see many spelling mistakes but there where times were you used periods were they weren't needed.
Descriptions: 10/10. Your descriptions literally blew me away. They were ABSOLUTELY amazing!!
Characters: 10/10 I love your characters and how I can relate to them sooo much! I can actually live their lives!
Real life situations?: 10/10 definitely could happen in real life.
Cliche: 10/10 Not so far!
Total: 58/60
Final review: i have no idea why you're insecure about your writing style because it was absolutely amazing. your so much of a better writer than me like daaaang. I actually don't have much to say because your book was awesome! Please update soon!
Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)
YOU ARE READING
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