Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!
title: 10/10
book cover: 10/10 beautiful cover
blurb//summary: 5/10 it didn't give me much of an insight on the story.
opening: 10/10 beautiful start. It didn't start out to strong and scare you away nor start off to light.
grammar: 10/10
characters: 10/10 I personally love Laney
descriptions: 10/10
enjoyment: 10/10 your story sucked me right in
Total: 75/80
Final review:
As soon as I started reading I couldn't stop. Just something about your story made me so intrigued that I wanted to know more. There's nothing bad to even say about your book. you're such a talented writer; better than me that's for sure.
Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)
YOU ARE READING
Lauryn's Book Reviews
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