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Hi

I'm lowkey hungry and just spent 2 hours I think writing a chapter that I had started several weeks ago and I still didn't finish it

I had a mental breakdown trying to remember the word "tissue" and now I need a break my mind worked since pretty early the morning

But yeah, I came back with a pretty interesting tag this time

Tagged by: mon lovely trésor HAEMATlC- lowkey one of the sexiest users tbh

Write three things about your writing style:

Oh god.

1. Descriptive: I rely on description quite a lot to allow readers to imagine the setting. While I tend to use adjectives quite more, I would say I'm average on usage of metaphors and oxymoron mostly, I am fine with every other figures of figures of speech but quite weak in the simile department. I am not fond of it as a figure of speech and find it less powerful than others. In fact, I think there are appropriate moments for its usage to have the impact aimed at.

Also, quick disclaimer that I base my knowledge on figures of speech on what I learned from French. I have yet to take the lesson in English, but I also thing European languages are quite similar in this? I don't know, it's what I read but I am not sure of the certitude of this information.

2. I mostly enjoy writing fluff because of the vocabulary I can explore within this category. I don't enjoy angst much because I don't know how well I write it. I REALLY like to write slice of life pieces but I don't do it that much, I just incorporate it in my writings. I would LOVE to learn how to write smut but I barely tried and I don't know much about it still.

3. I started writing in English in January 2020 (we don't talk about the letter I wrote back in 2015, cuz that's a no). It was very bad. I... It was fucking awful, oh god.

GOD SOMEONE MAKE IT STOP EKUSNATNQCNAFJA SO EMBARRASSING WTF JAEBEOM BABY IM SO SORRY BEHWHIAGKAYA I can't believe I'm exposing myself like this

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GOD SOMEONE MAKE IT STOP EKUSNATNQCNAFJA SO EMBARRASSING WTF JAEBEOM BABY IM SO SORRY BEHWHIAGKAYA I can't believe I'm exposing myself like this.

I just want to find it myself to delete these but I JUST CAN'T I WROTE THEM I CAN'T JUST... DELETE THEM. THAT'S... LIKE... KILLING MY OWN BOOKS.

I actually stopped writing around that time again and went back to writing in June 2020.

Yeah, all of this to say that my writing style improved... a lot.

3 things you'd like to improve about your writing style/s:

Just like Kiwi, I will write more than three because I feel like it.

1. The style itself: no matter how I see it, I think I can't bring myself to write stories that can draw people in. Maybe it's boring, maybe it's bland, I still have to figure it out.

2. Use of punctuation: Did you ever read any of my books with a semi-colon? I probably used them 10 times in 30 chapters. I just don't know when and how to use them. If someone wants to teach me, please do. But aside, I think I'm pretty good at the usage of em-dashs and en-dashs and the other one I don't even know what it's called.

3. Vocabulary: Self-explanatory. Oh to expand my vocabulary.
Also me: haven't touched a real book in years.

4. Adjective usage: so there's a rule when writing adjectives that I still need to grasp and fully respect.

But unlike other critics in this list, I'm taking this quite easily and not ushering myself to learn about it because even when I don't respect this order, people won't close my book and be like: "I'm out

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But unlike other critics in this list, I'm taking this quite easily and not ushering myself to learn about it because even when I don't respect this order, people won't close my book and be like: "I'm out." So, cool. 

5. Lenghty paragraphs: I need to work on this SERIOUSLY. Some things don't have to be mentioned, others don't have to be described. Sometimes, my paragraphs look messy and it deeply upsets me.

6. I have yet to write something that wows me and makes me go like: "wow, I did write that." I just want to write something that I won't go back to and blame certain aspects for it.

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Retagging phoxphenex so she would republish Taemin's mantra please help me convince her to bring it back can y'all believe she DELETED IT IEGQKGQNGANQ

Also, if you want to do this, do it and tag me I want to read

LASTLY, your affirmations are here:

I am wealthy
I am healthy
I am rich
I AM THAT BITCH
I am gonna get that bag
And I am not going to take anyone's shit.
I am protected
I am well respected
I am a queen/king/royal
I am a dream
I do what I want to do
And I will be who I want to be.

How does it feel being the baddest bitch to exist?

I got your back and I love you.

Your fucks are to precious to give to any. It's not worth it, trust me.

PERIODISM.

One last time: I love you ❤🤎🤍


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