The Cliche One Direction Fan Fictions

SWEET VICTORY YEAH!

So? What's up? Today I was simply looking through stories. Then I clicked one, was about to give it a try, when I saw it begin with:

BEEP BEEP!

Then after that I left. Seriously. Not even giving it a chance. But you know what? Because I'm nice, I exited, started to look through other stories, then went back to that same story. The girl got ready for school (not that detailed, thank god.) then she said,

"Oh, let me explain a little bit about myself. I'm 17, I only have one friend, I get bullied and my dad abuses me because my mother died and he blamed it on me!"

Everything I wrote in another story. How fantastic. :) Well, after that I exited the story. Time to cue the music. "SWEEEET, SWEET, SWEET, SWEET, VICTORY, YEAH!"

I literally sang that song after I exited the story! Try it, it's fun :)

Now! Onto some other stuff!

•Just Look. Lots of People Write Like This.

" hi. " I said to my best friend , Lindsay. " how are you " she said. " good i'm doing good " Lindsay is my best friend ever since elementary skool. she's really cool.

Lets wipe off those mistakes right there... No? It's not coming off? Okay.

You should try to put more of the ''enter'' button, putting the quotation marks closer to the words. (no space in between) and girl, get your grammar right! Remember, if you ask me for help, I am going to tell you what I think of it. But don't think I'm one of those mean critics, I actually think I tell people their tweaks of their story really nice :)

Sorry for the short chapter! I should really write my ideas down on a paper now. I keep on forgetting :( Anyways, if you have any ideas, message me or something. And if you want me to fan, vote, and read your story, I'm more than happy to do it! Byeeee