June Conlon (Newsies) pt3 Final Adventure

Behind the Scenes!!!!

Here is things i wanted to add/took out / reasons and notes for certain things :)

- The orphanage kids were based off of another newsie fanfic I wrote (I didn't publish it). I kept the twins, little daisy and millie. Lavender was going to be called Grace and the other boys were just added in.

- James could've been called Sam

- It was really hard picking June's name because nothing felt right.

- Here's my ranking of the June Conlon series

1. Returning to Brooklyn (pt2)

2. Meeting Manhattan  (pt1)

3. Final adventure  (pt3)

4. Isabella book.

It was a close call for first place. I just felt there was more interesting chapters in the second book.
The third book could've been a lot better and....we don't talk about the Isabella book :)

- I wish I didn't make so many ocs because it's hard to keep track and also give them all enough time in the books

- Zack was going to be good and meet his lover again.

- Liam was going to fall in love with June. But I thought it was kinda weird.

-I wish Manhattan was involved more in the story

-In the final chapter, I was going to make them go to a theatre to celebrate. Then they would cheer for June and sing to her. But then I realsied, realistically, lots would hate her :/

-I felt like near the end of the series was rushed

-I was going to make Flash vs James love triangle throughout the books. But I thought Lavender would fit being with Flash more.

-....Also.....kinda wish Lavender ended up with Flash 😅 I know I'm the writer but shhhhh

- I wish I did more with Mike :( I'm gonna edit this book so I hope I give him justice!

- In the first book, when June meets Smalls, she was actually going to meet Katherine:)

- At the time I felt like Smalls was never used in stories so I added her. But I kinda wished it was Katherine because I didn't added her later on (because there was no need)

- I wish I had moments with Brooklyn and Manhattan

- I liked how cute and simple the first stories were

- June was inspired by Annie

- I had this note book of little stories about newsies and this was the one I chose. Though all my ocs (no matter the character) was called Scarlet haha

- I wished I thought through and made the story more simple and fun

-Also sorry for the spelling and stuff. I started when I was 13 and I could barely write.

-I wish the orphanage kids were in it a bit more

-I was gonna do this dynamic where Jack takes brother role to June and Spot gets annoyed. I wish I did that because it would've been interesting.

-I wish I had more of a structure here

-I wish it didn't take me this long to write it. I have so many newsie stories in my head and I didn't wanna over do it

Also near the end I got really stressed. I wanted to just finish the book and I knew it was kinda getting worse. I hope one day I can make it better

- I felt that I tried to make some minor characters too big in the story

- June (in the first book) was going to go to the 'World' and meet the Delancy brothers. But I thought it was going to be too long