I really do and that's the point

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07/06/2020 1:42pm

character concept and short excerpt

I was sitting here imagining a character where everyone thinks they're carefree, a little airheaded, and happy-go-lucky... but they have some serious thoughts that the others overlooked. They became like this because they wanted to. So I imagined this next sort of scene. 


The others are giggling to themselves but Natasha clutches tightly onto the cake box and nervously glances around. "Guys, stop laughing! What if someone sees us? Won't that be really embarrassing?" 

 One of the girls chuckles a bit more before answering casually, "I mean, it's not like we're actually going there to have sex? If they ask, just explain. Most reasonable people will understand. If they don't ask, then its not your problem..." a huge grin appears on her face as she mockingly asks, "Unless you want something to happen." She continues to tease her friend by fake fainting onto the other girl with them. "Jessica, she's such a pervert. whatever will we do. She's going to eat us alive in there. Im too innocent for this." 

 Their friend just scoffs at her and pushes her off. "Leave the poor girl alone, she's already becoming a tomato as it is." Jessica pats their friend on the head comfortingly. "We're here to celebrate your birthday anyways, so lets just head it." 

 As Jessica and Chloe start walking towards the love hotel, they turn to see Natasha isn't following them...

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