𝑬𝒉𝒔𝒂𝒂𝒔 𝑬 𝑼𝒍𝒇𝒂𝒕 (𝑩𝒐𝒐𝒌 1)

Afreen

Hello everyone,

This note is regarding Afreen.

And I would like you people to please help me out.

I have some comments that Afreen is getting boring and even I am feeling same but then again to conclude this story I will have to continue because this story has some minor plots that I wanted to explore and I have actually completed writing them.

1. When I started writing Afreen, it was just because I couldn't find a single cousin marriage fiction with age gap, understanding husband, where the girl is a teenager and on top of that substitute bride.
( All that I have read were abusive to their wives.)

2. A conservative family where girls are shielded from everything.

3. The main topic, of Both Shayaan and Dua facing same sort of problems. They are the imperfect ones actually.

Dua having kind of sexual assault and Shayaan accused of being a womanizer.

4. And the love and trust that gradually comes in an arranged marriage. I can say this for sure because no amount of physical proximity can ensure your emotional bonding with your spouse in the few months of your marriage. The no. of divorces are high in first few months of marriage.

5. Also Shayaan not interested in his inheritance and many of the heirs nowadays are not actually and those who have read it properly would understand that he had actually found a substitute of this in his wife only.

And I believe I have explored all these themes in this one fiction.

But then, it has been stretched..

So please suggest me should I leave it as it is because I have no problem in doing so.

Or should I complete it like I have planned it.

Don't worry It's not even 35 parts long.

Maximum (10-12) parts are remaining and there will not be any more of drama except one.