oc rater [warrior cats]

dawntail

(This she-cat may not be to realistic and tbh, she's not 100% supposed to be)
okay! i'll be sure to keep this in mind as i'm going through. although, i'm wondering, is there a reason as to why she isn't? but that's extra, don't worry about this!

name || Dawntail
nicknames || N/A
past and future names || Dawnkit, Dawnpaw, Redscar
name reasoning(s) || Dawn - Because of her light ginger speckles and cause of her tail ig
Tail - Because of her Ginger tail
Redscar - She was renamed that because she was attacked by a aggressive badger and somehow survived, but her leader, Fowlstar, Decided to rename her because of her huge scars across her head and body.
okay! that's cool! poor dawntail, though, with the badger.

[1/1]

gender || Nonbinary
pronouns || She/They(In the rp its They/them)
sexuality || Lesbian
alrighty!

rank || Warrior
cool!

current age || 37 moons - (3 years and 1 month)
age of death || 97 moons - (8 years and a couple months)
okay!

clan || GlacierClan - (It says fernclan in the rp ik) - Snowy tundra area, that doesn't really live up to its name
oki!

ranks in order || Kit, Warrior apprentice, Warrior, Senior warrior, Queen, Warrior(Again because she was a queen at once), Starclan resident.
alright!

appearance || Snowy White she with a beautiful ginger tabby pattern, A long gingerish dawn colored tail, and clear blue eyes, Skinny tail, Pointed ears, They are a Color-pointed Short hair Orange tabby mix.
appearances do seem to be realistic!! although i think that perhaps it'd be just a tad more realistic for her to have amber eyes, but i do believe blue eyes are possible!

[2/2]

current personality (Before renamed) || Outgoing, loyal, kind, friendly, Tries to avoid having bad conflicts with anyone even from a different clan, Tiny bit shy.
other than a tiny bit shy, dawntail doesn't seem to have any more negative traits. perhaps, since they're loyal, they gets offended easily when other cats talk bad about her clan? something like that. and the 'tiny bit shy' seems to conflict with outgoing.

and i know that you put she isn't meant to be very realistic, but i think there's still a certain extent to that. i think that she should still have some more negative flaws, since at the moment she has little to none.

newest personality (After being renamed) || Little bit snarky, sassy, firm, Doesn't really trust a lot of cats.
i like the development! and i can definitely see why she'd be like that! i don't have much to comment on here.

[2/4]

apprentice || Cloudpaw???
okay!

old mentor || Fernrose
mhm.

likes || Dawn(The time)
cool!

[1/1]

dislikes || Midnight(The time)
oki!

[1/1]

backstory || Im sorry, im a little lazy rn:> ik i will resubmit this oc most likely if thats ok, But for now, you can just take the 2 points of for this.
okay! that's understandable, because i believe dawntail's from a roleplay; her backstory may not be as well developed yet.

[0/2]

family || family seems to be missing on the form!

[0/1]

final rating || 7/10 [included bonus points]

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sorry about the late response!! i didn't realize that she was from a role-play when i first saw this, so i was sort of waiting to see if you'd like to fill in her missing information. but, nonetheless, i do hope that this helped!