oc rater [warrior cats]

aspenkit

name || Aspenkit (I didn't put the sufix because its spoilers)
okay! that's understandable! 'aspen' itself is already a lovely name!

[1/1]

gender || Male
alright!

sexuality || Straight
oki!

personality || Shy, Awkward, Sleepy, always worried about getting in trouble, follows the code always
the personality's pretty realistic, with a good amount of flaws! curious, does aspenkit have a cat who he isn't shy and awkward around, like his mother or best friend, or does he act like this towards every cat? if his shy and awkward personally comes naturally, without a experience before that made him like this, i think that it's more realistic if he is a complete chatterbox to the cats he's closer with!

[3/4]

appearance || Ginger tom, beautiful green eyes
he sounds very lovely! and definitely realistic!

[2/2]

Family || Mother: Dewdawn - White she-cat with gray and tanish peach patches and spots, green eyes
Father: ??????(Unknown to the story yet) - Ginger tom, gold eyes
Brother: Moosekit - White tom with ginger and tan patches, gold eyes
ooh, okay! aspenkit certainly does sound realistic! and the gold eyes are beautiful!

[1/1]

likes || Sleeping, Not getting in trouble
makes sense, based off his personality!

[1/1]

dislikes || Running around, Getting in trouble
the getting in trouble part makes sense, but i'm curious about the running around bit. is it because he's sleepy, or awkward? or perhaps he's worried that running around would get him in trouble? i can't really interpret much of that from the personality! and it might not have a reasoning after it, but i am judging these based off of personality!

[0.5/1]

rank || Kit
mhm!

clan || Fernclan
okay! it would be best if you added some information about it, since it's a fanclan!

backstory || There really isn't one since there a kit
perfectly understandable! however, i'd prefer if you just put something basic, even something as simple as 'aspenkit had a normal kithood'. i can't really give points based off of this.

[0/2]

final rating || 8.5/10

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aspenkit sounds like a great oc, i especially like the personality, as i find it mostly relatable! however, i'd work on the backstory; i understand he's just a kit, but maybe there's still something going on? like with his personality, maybe he keeps fumbling in front of other cats or something like that? or maybe his kithood was pretty normal!

thanks for letting me rate aspenkit, i really enjoyed it! hope this helped!